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vts31
May 4th, 2003, 07:39 PM
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/Summer_Time_Summer_Nap.jpg

I saw a book recently on Degas, i like his work a lot.
No reference Images, only my imagination.
Painter 7

mdipi
May 4th, 2003, 08:09 PM
wow man, that looks good, especially from no paper!

UNFLUX
May 4th, 2003, 08:38 PM
i love the colors. brings out a cheery, relaxed mood. good piece
here edwin.

only thing that's distracting to me is the purple/bluish pillow
object. teh color makes it seem out of place to me. Unless that's
really the area of the work you want the eye taken to.

vts31
May 4th, 2003, 08:42 PM
Unflux. I totaly agree it is a compositional mistake. I forgot to change its color.

iLikePie
May 5th, 2003, 03:01 AM
it's really good, but to be honest i don't think it's up to your usual super-high standard.

specifically, the top arm looks weird, as if it must be twisted at a strange angle to sit like that (i think it's because of the shading)

also the bottom (the body part, not the location) looks a bit overdefined

it's still a nice piece, and the colours certainly say 'summer' but i've seen better from you :smirk:

on another note, the lighting is really nice, and the having tried a bit of life-drawing myself, i know how hard it is, so i can appreciate your skill, especially with no reference!

Stuart

andr.in
May 5th, 2003, 04:26 AM
now that's co0ol!