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[Bullet-Shells]

Ok My Site pretty much sucks but can..........give me a score from 1-10 juding me as a rookie please..................


http//:www.unspoken-truth.net/Shells

[reverendflash]

just curious, is there a reason you posted in random, rather than site check?

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[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by reverendflash
just curious, is there a reason you posted in random, rather than site check?

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I'm pretty much new here don't know all the difrrent sections that well how can i move it?

[reverendflash]

I'll move it for you. No prob, that is why I asked...

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[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by reverendflash
I'll move it for you. No prob, that is why I asked...

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Thankz alot bro

[Millad]

I will give you * of 10 !

* Make a preloader !
* Let the movie load togather !
* Main menu is small !
* text is not that clear in about me...etc !



? dont have any more I think !

I like the colors and the sound LOL !:chinaman:

nice work man !

Eminem : :trout: Nice music I like some of his music !

[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by Blastboy
I will give you * of 10 !

* Make a preloader !
* Let the movie load togather !
* Main menu is small !
* text is not that clear in about me...etc !



? dont have any more I think !

I like the colors and the sound LOL !:chinaman:

nice work man !

Eminem : :trout: Nice music I like some of his music !


if i knew how to make a preloader don't you think i would make one?

[Voetsjoeba]

http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/percentage_loader.htm

[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by Voetsjoeba
http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/percentage_loader.htm



Thats really smart I'm not using MX

I'm using FLSH 5 :beam:

[reverendflash]

bullet:

that search button is truly wonderful:

http://www.kirupa.com/developer/actionscript/preloader.htm

this one is in Flash 4, so I think you should be able to get it to work...

(we've been around for a while, so we have quite a few diff tutorials)

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[.soulty]

Hey Bullet-Shells , nice technical parts in your site, like the shout out section. Its all pretty good, just a few thing i would like to mention. The looping animations are too much in your face, if they are more subtle, like you could make that circles in the middle into a spinning Vinyl. and the 3 images on the right are annoying , maybe have them stay static and some difference effect on each, or if you were going for that tv static look, make the images move rapidly for a few sconds fading in and out, and add that scan line you have on the top left to the imags, so it looks like a tv losing reception.

::: the scream sound sample on the buttons of the top left are freaky bro, a bit too much for each button.

Maybe try the colour white for your type as well.

:: lose the animated dots on Eminem

Other than that, its pretty nice layout, needs some work, and could be even better.

Ill give you a 5 for now, because i can see alot of thing good but still can be improved.

[Cheez00]

DUDE WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM!!!! ;) im here by myself 3.13 am and i go o ver those butons, with no music playing and im ****ing startled out of my mind... makes me not want to visit that site anymore... >:( but the rest is ok, i like the shoutbox...

[Voetsjoeba]

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[Jubba]

VJ: only constructive criticism please.

[Jubba]

The site needs a lot of work. The rollOvers are too loud and annoying, the animation is too busy, no preloader, too much empty space.

[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by Cheez00
DUDE WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM!!!! ;) im here by myself 3.13 am and i go o ver those butons, with no music playing and im ****ing startled out of my mind... makes me not want to visit that site anymore... >:( but the rest is ok, i like the shoutbox...

Who gives a flying **** you fat basterd i would love if you not vist my site you fat basterd.

[Bullet-Shells]

Originally posted by Jubba
The site needs a lot of work. The rollOvers are too loud and annoying, the animation is too busy, no preloader, too much empty space.

And?...................... ****ing idioot if you read what i said up top about me being a rookie only had the program for about 4ms you prick.I BET YOUR PHOTOSHOP skills suck just like your MOM right?

[reverendflash]

Bullet:

that was uncalled for. Even tho he deserved it, do not lower yourself to that level. People get banned for this kind of thing.

Cheez:

cool it. post constructive comments in a friendly way, or don't post at all. If you are surfing at 3:00 AM, and don't want to be shocked by sounds on a webpage, then turn off your sounds... Any more outbursts like the one above, and you could be banned. We are all adults here, behave like one.

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[monark110]

it's not a bad site.
i must say that the 'screaming' links got the entire computer labs attention:)
it's different, but not really too bad

[reverendflash]

Originally posted by Bullet-Shells
And?...................... ****ing idioot if you read what i said up top about me being a rookie only had the program for about 4ms you prick.I BET YOUR PHOTOSHOP skills suck just like your MOM right?

Bullet:

appologize to jubba for this. This type of response is not tolerated here, especially towards a mod. If you can't take the heat, don't post your work. This is not the place to fish for compliments.

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[Bullet-Shells]

I will when he log-in.

[.soulty]

Hey bullets, just Pm jubba if you dont want to apoligize on the thread or leave a message here. I understand you might of mis-read the first message by Cheez00, he was just playing around, thats why he put a winking smilies after his first line
....WTF..................;)
But Jubba didnt do anything more than give you some advice on your site, like i did. Hope this can all work out. Latr Bro.

:smirk:

[Jubba]

You asked for critques and I gave them too you. Do you want me to sugar-coat it? I could tell you that its amazing and that I love it and that you are the best web designer ever, but then that wouldn't help you really now would it?

I said straight out what I think needed work.

1- The rollOvers are too loud. And I don't think blood-curdling screams are necessary. Although it did scare the **** outta my roommate. I do appreciate that.

2- There is no real point to the animations on the page. The main one in the middle is too distracting. While reading the comments in the shoutbox, my eyes kept migrating over to the animation. When you make a website you don't want anything to take away from the content. You want subtle animations that enhance the content.

3- There is no preloader, and its pretty standard to have one, even on small files. It wasn't a probelm for me, because I'm on a high speed connection, but I can see how this would take a while to load on a slower machine.

4- Too much empty space. You don't really utilize the space of the site effectively. Designing a website is a difficult thing. There are all these lines that should be crossed and there are all these things that you have to do. You can't make the site too busy or too dull, you can't make it too dark or too bright. You can't have too much stuff on the screen at once, overloading the viewer, and you can't have too much empty space because the eye wanders with out a definate focal point.

Your site needs work. I don't care if you just got Flash yesterday and this is what you churned out. You posted here asking for critiques on your site. I dont' care if you were my grandmother, I would give you the same critique. It needs work. A lot of it. If you can't take the critiques you get, then dont post it here. We aren't going to walk on egg-shells just because you can't take the criticism.

And I would appreciate an apology from you. And I would like you to apologize to Cheez as well. That kind of immature behavior is not tolerated here, at all.

Cheers,
Jubs


PS: Don't ever mention my mother again. I'm the only one allowed to call her a slut.

[Daveman]

It wouldn't load my end.. I'll give it another go later tonight...

Dave

[Erik]

Nice site dawg

[Erik]

I mean dog.

[Jubba]

Im still waiting for that apology Bullet.