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HubertCumbrdale
June 8th, 2006, 01:30 AM
Been lurking here for a bit, thought it was time to get my feet wet...

Any comments on what you think I did right or wrong etc, things I should've done differently etc... lay it on me...

http://serialthemovie.com/

Have at it... :huh:

Thanks
leisuresuitlissy
June 8th, 2006, 03:13 AM
beautiful...
looks like there is a lot of work in it, and I can't fault it.

:love:
hybrid101
June 8th, 2006, 05:49 AM
very nice work!
official entry eh? site looks awesome!
good job mate:thumb2:
sumo
June 8th, 2006, 08:07 AM
Great site! The menu might be too "hidden" though.
Digitalosophy
June 8th, 2006, 11:06 AM
Nice work but I almost closed the browser because I honestly couldn't find the menu.
HubertCumbrdale
June 8th, 2006, 12:43 PM
Thanks for the feedback.

Based on the comments about the menu, I altered it so the menu rolls out when the first section loads.

Let me know if that fixes that issue for you guys

Thanks
Digitalosophy
June 8th, 2006, 01:13 PM
Thanks for the feedback.
Based on the comments about the menu, I altered it so the menu rolls out when the first section loads.


Icing on the cake. :thumb:

Good job!
Oli-G
June 9th, 2006, 04:44 AM
Neat menu man :D.

I'd like to have seen a bit of crazyness in the actual links though, seems they're only angled because thats the space they've been 'allocated', so to speak, rather than designed that way in their own right.

I'd also take a quick look at the aliasing on some of the objects (borders etc) as well as the legibility of the fonts...

And are they photoshop clouds used as the background?

But neat work man, i'm sure it impressed.
HubertCumbrdale
June 9th, 2006, 09:44 AM
I'd like to have seen a bit of crazyness in the actual links though, seems they're only angled because thats the space they've been 'allocated', so to speak, rather than designed that way in their own right.

I'd also take a quick look at the aliasing on some of the objects (borders etc) as well as the legibility of the fonts...

And are they photoshop clouds used as the background?



Thanks for your feedback Oli.

I agree about the menu buttons. They weren't 'designed' the way the rest was, I just tossed in the text while programming then got sidetracked by other stuff I think. I'm probably going to go back and do something with them... I forgot how much that bothered me until you pointed it back out haha :crazy:

The clouds bg, that was given to me by the producers, it was part of their promo poster. It does sort of look like the PS clouds filter though.