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ApixDesigns
April 25th, 2006, 01:18 PM
ok heres the second version.
http://www.apixdesigns.com/experiments/magazinecover2.jpg
glosrfc
April 25th, 2006, 06:49 PM
Good dramatic cover picture- just not sure about the fonts. Definitely a kerning problem as some of the letters are too close or far apart.

I'm not a design expert but my eye is automatically drawn to that big empy bit of snow and blue sky because of the direction of the slope and the motion of the snowboarder. So that's probably where I would've expected to see the main headline item for this edition.
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Jugallette (http://juggalos.org/)
ApixDesigns
April 25th, 2006, 10:25 PM
ahh yes i see what you mean. i'll fiddle around with it and see what comes up.

thanks
bigmtnskier
April 28th, 2006, 01:54 AM
*shields eyes* Argh! Your not getting my vote!! :P :P

-bigmtnskier

(its a joke; i'm just kidding)
ApixDesigns
May 1st, 2006, 12:20 AM
*shields eyes* Argh! Your not getting my vote!! :P :P

-bigmtnskier

(its a joke; i'm just kidding)


heh, well its ment to catch your attention on the magazine stands. there are like 100+ magazines on the rack at a given time. I wanted it to stand out. any suggestions of what i could improve?
bigmtnskier
May 1st, 2006, 12:28 AM
heh, well its ment to catch your attention on the magazine stands. there are like 100+ magazines on the rack at a given time. I wanted it to stand out. any suggestions of what i could improve?
I was just joking because I am a skier, and don't really like snowboarding :P.

The only suggestion I have is to fill up some of the space where the sky is with pictures, featured articles, titles, etc... Other than that, it looks good! :D
=guinness=
May 2nd, 2006, 10:07 PM
Judges check this one, I'm not sure if you would call it a rip but the picture is a cover from SnowBoarding International magazine. November 2005 I think. Placement of text is similar too.
ApixDesigns
May 14th, 2006, 04:34 PM
its not a rip... i got a picture of my favourite snowboarder (andreas wiig) from transworld snowboarding(their photo section) you could call any magazine with the text placement at the top a rip then if your actually being seroius. just because something is similar does in no way mean it was a rip.... wtf is snowboarding international anyways? i searched on google and i couldnt even find their website...