Tour of EGYPT

[twinkle2me]

Hi All,
Egypt is a magazine about egyptian travel & history. Its goal is to rediscover the anicent egypt.i hope you all like it.This is my 2nd Entry.
Comments Please.
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3253/egyptmag4pf.jpg

[theflash]

Looks nice... I like the title (but 'E' in Egypt is a bit odd due to touch of branches)

But I did not get the use of fonts on contents... 1 is sarif and the other is sans sarif type... I would think of making it consistent...

[_this]

Good! i like the image and fonts.
i do not like the bg of code bars.
:/

[twinkle2me]

Good! i like the image and fonts.
i do not like the bg of code bars.
:/

Thanks for your opinion.So do u want me to change the color of barcodes.can u pls suggest me which colors i must use.:)

[twinkle2me]

Looks nice... I like the title (but 'E' in Egypt is a bit odd due to touch of branches)

But I did not get the use of fonts on contents... 1 is sarif and the other is sans sarif type... I would think of making it consistent...

Thanks for sharing ur opinion.i've changed the alphabet E & also changed the fonts.i hope its alrite now.pls let me knw wht do u think abt it now:)

[theflash]

E looks better now :thumb:

[glosrfc]

Ahhh yes, I can also see that it's an E now :)

However the headline at upper left looks strange - the kerning seems to have vanished so it all looks a bit squeezed together, almost as if the letters have been added manually. I've also got to agree about the fonts, they still don't look consistent. I would've aimed for perhaps sticking to one family of fonts (apart from the title) but it looks like you have used a monospaced typewriter-style font for your issue #/price; san serif Arial-style font for one headline; serifed Times (with drop shadow) for the second set of headlines; an outline font for the third headline; what looks like an Egyptian-style font for the price; and then a further font for the banner. Changing the Arial font to Times would probably solve the kerning problem and also give a more consistent look to the cover generally.

The barcode looks fine although I think it should appear on a completely white background to ensure that it's picked up by a scanner. Removing the tint from that element would do the trick.

Other than that, it's a nice looking page and certainly a mysterious and alluring cover photo.
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[twinkle2me]

Thank u guys for all the comments, its really encouraging n vry supporting.
now i've learnt to maintain the font consistency. I've changed the barcode also.if there's any other changes pls let me knw.
Cheers!!:thumb: