Taste Buds - 1st Entry

[twinkle2me]

Hi,

I'm new here and this is my 1st entry.Comments please.

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9136/tastebudsver027vs.jpg

[Pasquale]

Nice- only issue is teh header IMO- not fitting in as well as the rest. Fix that and it will be sweet :)

[twinkle2me]

=) Nice- only issue is teh header IMO- not fitting in as well as the rest. Fix that and it will be sweet

Thanks for ur comments.i've made few changes to the header part.Pls take a look n let me know ur opinion,Thanks:)

[Pasquale]

Looks nicer! :)

[theflash]

Looks good... nice mag... looks tasty :)

[Pasquale]

I'd eat it anyday heh

[_this]

del.ici.us kk

[ICEshortie]

woww this is delectable!!!

[glosrfc]

Now this is, in my opinion, far more attractive than your Egypt magazine. An excellent cover image that draws the eye into the page and sympathetic use of colours to reinforce the strawberry appeal.

The only niggle is, again, the use of different fonts particularly the main central headline. I think this would look far better if you used the same font as for your "dessert" headline and possibly made it look a little more prominent on the page.

Apart from that though, it looks great.

[twinkle2me]

Thanks for your comments.i've made changes to the points you had mentioned.now i've also maintained the fonts consistency. pls let me knw ur opinion.:)

[glosrfc]

Much more pleasing aesthetically - and nice touch with the strawberry fill on the one font too.

But don't just ask me. I suspect that, deep down, the original fonts probably jarred with you too otherwise you wouldn't have made the alterations...now you've made them, doesn't it look better to you?

Best of luck with your entry.