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Jeff Wheeler
April 22nd, 2006, 08:19 PM
I based the name off my last name, since I'm not creative at all. Oh, and the Address sticker thing is as accurate as I can get. I don't know the last four digits of his zip code, sadly (I mean, the extended zip; the firs five are right).

http://nokrev.com/dump/kirupa/wheels-mag.jpg

Base image… (http://www.sxc.hu/photo/206210)

I'm not terribly fond of it, but I hope you like it. :)

Edit: Fixed a typo.

MTsoul
April 22nd, 2006, 08:20 PM
Neat0!

Jeff Wheeler
April 22nd, 2006, 10:04 PM
Hehe, thanks. :)

Edit: I've updated it. I've added page numbers and a price.

SlowRoasted
April 22nd, 2006, 10:14 PM
interesting idea. Like the quality of the image too.

Jeff Wheeler
April 23rd, 2006, 07:34 PM
Thanks. :D

Secretly, I was waiting for a response in this thread until I would do my homework. Thanks!

Edit: Bump.

Alright… I've bumped this once and for all! Just reply already… hehe. :)

freeskier89
April 23rd, 2006, 09:04 PM
Alright nokrev, I will reply :)

Looks great! A little bit too simple for me, but I still think it looks good :D

My threads haven't got much of a responce either :( This one got a whopping (sp?) 1 post
http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=216444

and my other one got 4 posts:
http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=216444

Jeff Wheeler
April 23rd, 2006, 09:43 PM
Thanks. I'll try adding more… :)

At last somebody replied! Oh, and you posted the same thread twice. ;)

ApixDesigns
April 23rd, 2006, 10:06 PM
hey nokrev. it looks alright. i can tell that it was cut out from an initial picture because of the slight glow you put around it. its very nice. a tad bit too simple though. try adding a very slight gradient in the bg. good work though

Jeff Wheeler
April 23rd, 2006, 10:48 PM
Yeah, it was cut out, but not by me. That's how I found the image. I'll try fixing it up, though.

Good idea with the gradient background. I'll try that, also. :D

Pasquale
April 23rd, 2006, 10:49 PM
the gradient will kill the shadow though :S

Nice mag nokrev :P

ApixDesigns
April 24th, 2006, 12:05 AM
the gradient will kill the shadow though :S

Nice mag nokrev :P

not if you do it very subtly... then if it does just increase the shadow so u can see it over the gradient....

vini
April 24th, 2006, 12:46 AM
pretty Neat.

Jeff Wheeler
April 24th, 2006, 01:23 AM
Thanks…

serkios
May 9th, 2006, 10:53 AM
Looks good...but how many different fonts do you have on there? I think I can spot 3 different ones (maybe 4) which is a big "no no" in design. Should only have 2 different fonts for something like this thats supposed to be clean and readable. You can use different weights of those two fonts to get some variety. And I also agree about the small halo around the wheelbarrow. Just needs some cleaning up.