Gangsta for Beginners

[Skunkycomics]

Hey everyone, here's my attempt - hope you like it! :crazy:
http://www.skunkycomics.com/MBgangsta.jpg

[SlowRoasted]

I like the title text. You seem to have the look and feel going okay but the art on the main guy is really messy and takes away from the overall design.

[Pasquale]

Not diggin the rest of the fonts- and like SlowRoasted said - the character looks really messy. Clean him up with some bold flowing linework :)

[Skunkycomics]

thanks peeps for the feedback, its an attempt - shall post up another version soon..ish ;)