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shiftedfocus
April 20th, 2006, 08:40 PM
Hey, here my entry.

Went for a minalistic look and I wanted to do something that would stand out from the average magazine on the racks. The idea behide .lifestyle is just a monthly magazine packed full of the months guide to all events and also introducing art/music/fashion. I just wanted to producing something I think I would see and buy.

Anyway hope you like, let me know.

--shiftedfocus

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esnetni
April 20th, 2006, 08:52 PM
Try adding more stuff there is to much empty space.
In my opinion I would never by that magazine.

SlowRoasted
April 21st, 2006, 12:26 AM
Yeah i agree, too much empty space. Fill it up with something.

enforcer73
April 23rd, 2006, 06:28 AM
not bad, but i think one or two more elements could be added. Alos repeat the same words in yout text to much eg. "fresh talent", "chillout spots" and "reviews". Spose they are not really design elements, but it does make for an uneasy read. Otherwise I like