Ocean Travel

[freeskier89]

Hello again,

Here is my second entry and possibly the last. I will modify in the future probably. I am really curious to what you guys think, and I feel free to critique!

My main question is, do you think that there is too much blank space above the puerto madryn text? I kind of like it, because it isn't cluttered. But I can also see why some would say that it looks too blank.

Thanks a lot!

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/950/oceantravel4zi.th.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/my.php?image=oceantravel4zi.jpg)

[SlowRoasted]

too much of the travel is cut off by the penguin head. Other than that it looks pretty good.

[ApixDesigns]

looks arlight, not fond of the text though. but it looks pretty solid

[Pasquale]

:D like I mentioned in the PM- try the font I told ya :P

[freeskier89]

Thanks guys! I will definitely change the font in a bit and add some more detail :D