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ø
04-16-2006, 08:09 AM
My magazine!

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6493/westcoastmagazine2ta.th.png (http://img114.imageshack.us/my.php?image=westcoastmagazine2ta.png)

williby27
04-16-2006, 08:54 AM
i got really exciting cause i thought it was gonna be a West Coast Eagles footy team mag, even though i support carlton haha, anyways she looks good keep it up

ø
04-16-2006, 09:07 AM
haha.. thanks;)

LionheartAce
04-16-2006, 09:08 AM
So far so good, the only thing I noticed was that all the text in the magazine has anti aliasing; however, the title does not, especially around the W.

SlowRoasted
04-16-2006, 11:33 AM
I love it. Nice layout and love the creativity with the sub stories. I really think you should take the bevel off the title. Is it just me or do bevels looks so crappy and noobish?

ø
04-16-2006, 11:49 AM
hmm... maybe. I sort of liked it^^ It can be noobish if it is way too much tho:P
I'll make one without the bevel and see. But thanks:D

footsie
04-16-2006, 11:57 AM
hey dizzy good to see ya again :D, ur registration number on the magazine should be in smaller fonts. Registration numbers are always kept in smaller fonts:)

pijengerl
04-16-2006, 12:21 PM
Lol I love it... especially because you used my fav font for the title!
Good job!

ø
04-16-2006, 02:19 PM
Footsie: Nice to see you too:) Do you mean the issue nr and date? It would look better with a smaller font yes.. I see it too:)
Pijengerl: thanks:D

EDIT: fixed to a smaller font;)

Sicerp
04-17-2006, 11:00 AM
yea good job on this. layout works for the type of mag and pics arn't that bad either. not to be a picky a-hole, but is there a space already between the semi-colon and 'G' for gangsta? if there is then NM but it looks like it may need one, err something (-:

ø
04-17-2006, 11:07 AM
I know:P I first wrote "gansta" instead of "gangsta". So when I changed it the "gangsta" text took up a bit more space then the "gansta". That is why it may look a bit silly or not right. I'll try to fix it;) thanks

ø
04-17-2006, 11:15 AM
EDITED: ;)

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Sicerp
04-17-2006, 11:27 AM
yes indeed. much better. good turnaround as well. :thumb:

ø
04-17-2006, 12:57 PM
Thanks Sicerp:)

ritual
04-17-2006, 02:04 PM
Haha, i don't like the bevel but the gta font works well,

respect.

ø
04-17-2006, 03:39 PM
Gee! I hate to post my "final" product all the time:P
But now, I have removed the bevel and think this is the last one! Looks better too:)

http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/1183/westcoastmagazine7pj.th.png (http://img507.imageshack.us/my.php?image=westcoastmagazine7mp.png)

Sicerp
04-17-2006, 04:17 PM
THAT looks sooo much cleaner too. nice work *after so many revisions*

ø
04-17-2006, 05:16 PM
yeah! lol;p

LionheartAce
04-17-2006, 09:55 PM
*clap* Good work.