a little art piece i made in flash.

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i am still working on this piece. Please comments, suggestions, insults are welcome.

[applejelly]

I can't see it :S

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http://beautifultorture.com/art/mind.swf

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sorry i forgot the link. my bad guys. lol

[applejelly]

no worries :P

Is the art meant to be the preloader? because if it is, its very nice :) maybe make it gradually change colours? if the thing it was loading was the art, then you need to compress it better. Many people (like me, Im watching my bandwith, I almost topped my limit last month) can't wait for that to load :(

[3d Nirvana]

the preloader was very nice..... it took wayyyyyy to long though. The actual piece was ok I guess, I like how it kept to the beat... but you didn't change the thing enough, I was almost ready to exit while I watched like dots spin around the same picture for like 30seconds (but I didn't cuz I wanted to critique it :))

I think it would be a lot better if it was a little more complex and faster paced... but otherwise good job :thumb:

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thanks. yeah the compression needs work hardcore. Just wanted to get a general crtique. But yeah i surly want to spice it up some more. I guess when i think about it. It is really just a slide show.

[Pasquale]

WOO i dont get it O.o hehe

[theflash]

I closed the browser I did not see anything ...

[evildrummer]

I had to wait for ages to see it, but it was pretty good but you should either use less fractals or make the quality on the fractal images better!

[hybrid101]

if you don't see anything, maybe try right clicking it and save target as

[theflash]

aha... it's not huge... it's enourmous size for flash 12MB :)

downloading it... will post you my views when done


Surely looks you did a good amount or work... From your title of the file I am guessing that the title is related with mind... Some of the transitions were ok needed some work... Some images I did not understand in relation to your title... Otherwise nice work... it is slow though... I will say rather than adding more to it, rework some of the issues..

best wishes

[Darlo]

Very nice although it takes abes to preload, also where can i send the £2 bill for exceeding my bandwidth limit for the day due to downloading your art? (please warn people that the file is huge!) :D

[thesparky007]

you have a lot of patience man!

[DDD]

I dont get it....I felt like it was some kind of brainwash, subliminal message thing telling me to go buy a big mac from mc donalds.

what is the purpose of this?

[Slim Hazard]

It's a wicked beat to animate to, and your timing & style really suits it. I would never have waited that long to watch it though unless it were on here. I don't think you should spend a lot of time tweeking this piece, I say leave it and take what you've learnt and start something new. Some elements of it were ace, you should take those on and make something better.

[ApixDesigns]

i feel like im on acid or something hehehe. cool work. it kinda seems like its a showreel of your porftolio.

[SelectionTool]

file too large bruv

[=guinness=]

don't like it, the pieces are unrefined and difficult to make out, esp on the fractals. Color choice is a bit odd as well looks like 100% c m y k