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zerga
April 11th, 2006, 01:48 PM
Hey guys,
I'm working on my new company site and was wondering about what I should do to enhance it. There isn't a logo yet and there aren't any animations or more pages, I just wanted to know what people thought about the general "feel" about what website. Post anything you guys think I should change about it! Thanks for any comments.

http://meva.onvtn.net/ahihi.html

JoshuaJonah
April 11th, 2006, 01:53 PM
Theres nothing to crit. A bunch of (totally overused) diagonal bars. meh.

gvozden
April 11th, 2006, 02:10 PM
the top dark blue should be just one coloured
make something more interesting instead
some animation with logo or similar
rest is ok
maybe too dark for my taste

mikken
April 11th, 2006, 07:01 PM
Looks like a mission briefing screen for an FPS

bwh2
April 11th, 2006, 07:34 PM
a few things i would consider changing:
- you make a pretty dramatic shift from centered to left aligned. it's really confusing to look at.
- your space for actual content is pretty small. so if you have a lot of it, scrolling could become cumbersome.
- the big thick diagonal lines just aren't working
- be careful not to use too much texture (my guess is you threw in the big thick diagonal lines to cover this up)
- if you're going to use flash for this, make sure it's appropriate
- try throwing in dummy content for more critique
- you're borderline looking really templaty. i would try to avoid that.

on the positive, thusfar navigation is easy. subnavigation is yet to be seen.

hybrid101
April 12th, 2006, 05:08 AM
actually, i like it a lot:)
but remove the cloud things behind the text, it doesn't fit the site