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Jeesus
April 11th, 2006, 12:56 PM
Hi everyone!
Now it´s time for u all to really comment and critique this site.
I´m thinking about som stylish bubbles in the background. To give the site more "life". Anyone got a good one?
Anyway.. seems like the site is running a bit slow. Is it the same way on your machines?
This site is going live on monday the 17:th.. so that gives us a couple of days to finish it..
Would be greatful for any comments on navigation, pixels or whatever
Here´s the site!
www.flott.se (http://www.flott.se)
chazzychazz
April 11th, 2006, 01:08 PM
Yeah, it's extremely choppy.
danulf
April 11th, 2006, 01:27 PM
the transitions are pretty choppy! other than that it looks nice!
EDIT: oh, and the quotes on the front page are too small, I had to zoom in two times to be able to read them....
Jeesus
April 11th, 2006, 01:35 PM
anyone know why they are so choppy??
Jeesus
April 11th, 2006, 01:36 PM
Yeah, and the text are suppose to be small, but if you can´t read them they are way to small.. thanks
rille31
April 11th, 2006, 01:46 PM
I liked it but the transitions where alittle "choppy" and the quotes way to small but still like it.
Bra jobbat!
Jeesus
April 11th, 2006, 02:12 PM
could the framerate cause this kind of problem? Or is the file to heavy?
I think i use 32 frames/s or something like that, heard that 31 i optimal, but doesn´t it run smoother when you have a higher framerate?
danulf
April 11th, 2006, 02:21 PM
oh right! It was a swedish site :D
Väldigt många svenskar här på sistone!
JoshuaJonah
April 11th, 2006, 02:24 PM
That isn't frame rate, that's a heavy file. Maybe post the FLA for some help optimizing it.
Jeesus
April 11th, 2006, 03:05 PM
yeah i suppose.. but when I did the generate size report it says that the size of the exported actionscript is ~200k.. is that a lot?, maybe I should consider, importing the actionscript from an .as file instead? Whould that help?
Dtads
April 12th, 2006, 08:17 AM
Site looks cool for fashion, as its swedish I wasn't sure what to do, but I clicked around on the main button, can't really say much on the naivation side of things.
I am not to keen on the faded border in the contact section though, but it could be just down to personal taste.
Have you manage to change the text since, becuase they still come out quite small on my mamchine.
As for the choppy animation, you might want to find a clever way of doing i.e. maybe look into masking, (I am not to sure how u have scripted your animations).
But overall the site looks good, I am sure once you have manage to find a work around for the choopiness, it will look/feel much better.
mawooshen
April 13th, 2006, 01:35 AM
I liked it, but noticed that your main preloader for the main swf is not showing until the file is about 70% loaded already. I just had the same problem the other day when I tried to make a preloader for my site.
In your case I was left with a blank grey screen for about 30 seconds with my window saying "page loaded" before anything happened.
I think the problem is your actionscript classes and symbols that you attach dynamically are all exported to frame 1 of the file which means you have to wait until they are all loaded before you can even see the preloader... or so I read somewhere.
check out the "loading complications" section of this tutorial:
http://www.senocular.com/flash/tutorials/preloading/
Jeesus
April 13th, 2006, 07:40 AM
I think I got a little bit of the choppiness away after some reconstruction. Looks better on my own machine at least.. Having second thoughts about the colors again.. anyone got an idea on how to improve?
Jeesus
April 13th, 2006, 08:22 AM
Trying to make this preloading thing work, but it´s hard..
CayoHueso
April 13th, 2006, 09:44 AM
Hi, I would like to know how did you match the pattern in the background of your swf, with th ebackground of the html page. Even if you zoom in the swf the background stays in size to match the pattern.
I am trying to create something like that and haven't found a solution for that.
Could you please suggest any tutorial, or advice?
Thanks
chazzychazz
April 13th, 2006, 10:33 AM
CayoHueso: Window Mode: Transparent Windowless.
williby27
April 13th, 2006, 10:46 AM
the site is so well designs, if it ran smoothly it would be great. I also found some of the text hard to read.
Slim Hazard
April 13th, 2006, 10:50 AM
i like the look of the site. the photos are great, but it's still too choppy. If it's coming out at 200k I don't think that's too big. Maybe just keep tinkering with it until you can make it run smoother. Apart from that I thought it was great.
BoonDock
April 13th, 2006, 01:49 PM
I think it's pretty good, but why is it so choppy and PC intense?
Jeesus
April 13th, 2006, 04:49 PM
I think the choppiness comes from serveral "as. tween" running at the same time. It can also be because the full body pictures are transparent png:s and therefore are quite heavy..
Colorwise? Good / Bad... Thinking, lime(even though it´s been totally overused) or blue.. or maybe black..
Anyway the site goes live this monday!
Hideout
April 14th, 2006, 02:23 AM
overall looks great. Try using some rollovers or dead states for you buttons.
Jeesus
April 18th, 2006, 05:42 AM
Done with the rollover function on the main menu buttons.. gives more feedback and experience of navigation.. thanks for the idea
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