opinions please

[grimdeath]

hey guys i jsut finished my brochure, its a 4 fold legal letter brochure check it out

P.S. the squares are just guides they wont be in the final version

http://www.bmv-interactive.com/front.jpg
http://www.bmv-interactive.com/inside.jpg

any input is welcomed

[liam]

nice, i like the sepia tone feel used for your 2 images on the front, but when i go to the inside...

it looks totally uncoordinated, like they are 2 totally different pieces. maybe try to get a recurring color scheme there, or something.. also, definetly lose that purple crosshair thing under "print"...

also, fix the blurry pxl fonts. other than that, nice work!

[upuaut]

Looking very good.. but I'm with Liam on all his points. Definitely very professional start though.

[grimdeath]

thanks for the input guys the blurry fonts ill take care of as for the inside i want to use this since my main focus is creating websites, if you visit my site you can see why i use the icons on the bottom of each section, is in order to maintain continuity with my website

my website: http://www.bmv-interactive.com

p.s. the crosshair is actually a 3d registration mark like the ones used when printing ;)

[mlk]

i really like the photos in front but ill make the same point: i dont like the window-like feel of the inside...