My Entry: Music Magazine

[Ste]

Hi i'm new here :thumb:

Here is my entry, cover for a music magazine:mu:

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1933/magcover3pn.jpg)

[esnetni]

Wow Impressive its brilliant.

[raduku]

good job, i like it, especialy the black & white picture in the background :sailor:

[icleric]

i like this one :thumb:

[Mitch]

I like the tecno look :D nice style dude.

But it misses something..

[SlowRoasted]

Looking good, I like the colors and the font on the title. I agree you could go further with it.

[Ste]

Looking good, I like the colors and the font on the title. I agree you could go further with it.

Thanks a lot for the comments. How could i take it further? Im not sure what to add without taking away the clean look.

[Krilnon]

You might not want to have white text with a white background. For example, in "We sort the men from the boys", "the" is hardly able to be read.

[TheCanadian]

I can read it fine, but I'm not a big fan of the line going through the persons face. Other than that it looks great :thumb:

[sameerzs]

nice :)

[Armored]

Very nice! Great idea, nice picture and good choice of color scheme. But I would say it is somehow unballanced with all the text lined up to the right. Also move the bottom large entry somewhere else, off the face.

Just my two cents...

[Ste]

Thanks for all the comments, i have made a small update.

[poccer2]

Hi i'm new here :thumb:

Here is my entry, cover for a music magazine:mu:

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7757/magcoverv20gj.jpg

Nice! I like the use of Black and white. Also how the blue blends in whith the colours.I like here earphones they are well coloured and well done!

Nice job!
poccer2

[ravicreative]

TUNEAGE title need to be done some patchwork.looks like it is just pasted on the cover..make it more realistic..

[n.digo]

I say it's realistic enough! i also like the reflection of the title in her eyes

[itsalljazzy]

I think this one looks cool....I really like the blue additions... =)

[Pasquale]

I'd buy it :):thumb: