ENTER for creators from creators

[Mitch]

Hee Peeps,

This is my entry,

Its called enter because its need to be a magazine for young designers that want to be the best!!!! :)And its digital and enter is a well know key from the keyboard.

It's a mag that handle's dif subjects, this month main subject is character design. That explains all the characters on the front.

I looked good at other magazines covers and tried to give it my own twist, all the illustrations are mine (so you know that ;)) It's important that it looks creative and that its attractive.

update III

http://web.mit.edu/kirupa/Public/magazine/enter.jpg


Update II

http://www.mitchleeuwe.nl/kirupa/magazin2.jpg

First version (old):

http://www.mitchleeuwe.nl/smal_magazine.jpg

[antizip]

man that's nice

[NANO3]

neat! great drawings

[zeldafreak]

holy cow, this is amazing! nice work dude!

[icleric]

awesome dude! best entry till now :thumb:

[hybrid101]

dude, that is some awesome vector art!
great work;):thumb:

[Mitch]

Thnks all :)

That headphone and the stifs are a new style to me :) glad you like it.
How do you'all think about the design of the magezine itself, positions and stuf?

[SlowRoasted]

Yeah very nice work.

[bigmtnskier]

Good luck having the scanners read the barcode :P

Other than that... Look's great!

[TheCanadian]

Looks awesome - you even have the cliche magazine slogan "for x from x" :thumb:

[Mitch]

Thnks :)

Yeah that bar code needs to be a "little" bid smaller :D
I whas thinking that it was a original line Canadian ;)

I hope I have some time for a couple of little changes.

[sameerzs]

Awesome!! :)

[Mitch]

Update, is this one better :) I think it is.

http://www.mitchleeuwe.nl/kirupa/magazine.jpghttp://www.mitchleeuwe.nl/kirupa/magazin2.jpg
http://www.mitchleeuwe.nl/magazin2.jpg

[williby27]

i think you have just put the icing on the cake there, very tidy stuff :bounce:

[Skunkycomics]

great work there - crisp and clean! :thumb:

[raduku]

Dude, i like this one. It's a possible winner. Did you make it with Photoshop or Flash?:sen:

[Mitch]

Did you make it with Photoshop or Flash?:sen:
Adobe illustrator :azn:

[Ben Smith]

Woah. Love it. Nice vectors

[Sicerp]

Indeed very smooth man! for sure gonna be hard to top this one!:beam:

[.soulty]

very nice! .. few things i will mention, text on bottom could be smaller just a touch, and i think you could do something more interesting with those dots in your list.... if theres anything more im not saying :P ..

looks great, good luck on the comp! :)

[Mitch]

very nice! .. few things i will mention, text on bottom could be smaller just a touch, and i think you could do something more interesting with those dots in your list.... if theres anything more im not saying :P ..

looks great, good luck on the comp! :)

Thnks :)

I will have a look at that points you mentiont.
Does anyone else have some comments on the layout? :)

[Pasquale]

Only critique is to clean up some area of ur characters a bit- but nice work! :D

[ø]

very nice! :D clean;)
love it

[theflash]

Very nice vector work here... looks a great magazine :) I will buy one :thumb:

[kydee6039]

Nice overall. A few suggestions - i think the type on the bottom needs to be smaller and tracked out. The barcode sitting on black looks funny and the bullets next to your copy are way to huge - other than that looks pretty good.

[Mitch]

Thnks, I agree with some points. But I don't get it why you find the barcode sitting on black looks funny :alien:

I will adjust this points soon :) If anyone else have some points. There welcome :)

[suranija]

very neat and crisp... Good work babu :)

[Mitch]

Ok, I checked the feedback and see my update.

[glosrfc]

Ouch! This page took a while to download ;)

But yeah, I can't really say much more than the others really - good images and an overall funky look that will clearly attract the younger designers your magazine is aimed at. From an editorial angle I would want to tighten up a little on the masthead though - at the moment it looks good as your cover is entirely vector-based but how would it look if your cover image was a jpg? Another consideration is can it be read if most of it was obscured by other magazines on a newsstand?

But those are minor points and the artwork alone is excellent - well done.
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[Mitch]

Thnks! That's feedback I wanted to hear :)

I don't have experience with that and yeah maybe youre right, I could have used white boxes and simple shapes with text in it but that wouldn't be very creative... And creative and experimentel whas my main aim. But if you have tips I liked to hear them :D

But you see alot of vector magezines in the store, for example computer arts sometimes.

For example digital creative arts # jan/feb.

They used circels and boxes for text and alot of black.

*I did something against the loading :D

[thebloodpoolkid]

Very nice!!

one thing I noticed was, "character" is spelled wrong on the bottom.

[Pasquale]

^:lol:

[Mitch]

:m2: Didn't you come any sooner with that comment :P.... It stands there for 3 weeks and nobody noticed :D

[_this]

ultra great ....
but not 4 magazine...
;]

Congrat!

[Mitch]

Why not :) ;)

[ironmonk3y]

What style of character art is that?

[samual]

It funtastic dude!!

[Pasquale]

Holy revivals batman

[danulf]

http://www.benoit.cc/ts/holy_necroposting_batman.jpg

:hugegrin:

[biznuge]

Robin: "Holy molars! Am I ever glad I take good care of my teeth!"
Batman: "True. You owe your life to dental hygiene." :thumb2:

Wasn't this thread originally like >ten pages long...?:sigh:

[wes_design]

Thnks all :)

That headphone and the stifs are a new style to me :) glad you like it.
How do you'all think about the design of the magezine itself, positions and stuf?

nice..I like how you started with two small characters to end up to one big one in the corner

EDIT: sorry for the late comment just didn't have enough time to look through this section:)