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guitarplayer08
March 10th, 2006, 01:20 PM
http://www.freewebs.com/h2ostudio/Indexa.html

Tell me what you think guys! :thumb2: Too Plain? Colors dont match?

Currently theres no loading screen so if it doesnt run smooth, please wait until its loaded and refresh ur browser :)

unclesond
March 10th, 2006, 01:22 PM
Fine, show us some more! (-: Looks good, not too keen on button font. Nothing much to critque yet tho....

guitarplayer08
March 10th, 2006, 01:26 PM
Yeah I know those font for the menu is kinda ugly i think

I want to get another pixel font that are big enough and appropriate for a menu, but also free download.

U know any?

unclesond
March 10th, 2006, 01:36 PM
Fonts for flash (http://www.fontsforflash.com/) or iamcal (http://www.iamcal.com/misc/fonts/) or orgdot (http://www.orgdot.com/aliasfonts/) u shld find something nice in one of them (-:

joifan2k
March 10th, 2006, 02:04 PM
love it :)

fasterthanlight™
March 10th, 2006, 02:34 PM
Not much to comment on, but I'll comment on whats there

that image, too blurry, your probably going to lay some graphics and text over it but still, its wayyyyyy too blurry, just dumb it down a notch

Would love to see how your going to animate the menu rollovers etc

And transitions for that matter too....

Also, for each page are you going to have a different background image that is of a different root colour? for example, Home has that orange one now, maybe find a blueish one for media, a green one for about etc and change the font colours in each section to match.

maybe theres a graphic you can whip up to throw in with your logo because just text for logos is pretty much the lamest thing ever

unclesond
March 10th, 2006, 03:14 PM
maybe theres a graphic you can whip up to throw in with your logo because just text for logos is pretty much the lamest thing ever noooooooo i love text logos, the bigger the better ;)!!!!!!

This is probably a never ending arguement :d: but I think stick with what you have logo wise

fasterthanlight™
March 10th, 2006, 03:31 PM
it depends on the application... some logos need to be text only to fit in with a design,

in this case, theres way too much text going on at the top of the page, definatley change the ISA into some kind of ISA graphic

simplistik
March 10th, 2006, 03:41 PM
umm... looks ok for now... nothin to really say... good colors... bad fonts.

and I agree w/ uncle, i actually like the logo. it's extremely simple and "boring" but it works

unclesond
March 10th, 2006, 03:45 PM
theres way too much text going on at the top of the page

not really. only 5 other words apart from the logo.....I'd agree in some situations, but this really doesn't look out of place. Maybe you could align your nav from the right too.

giginger
March 10th, 2006, 03:49 PM
Stick with the text.

As mentioned just above I'd justify the text more to the right.

I'd also swap the colours of the font. Have the fonts in orange to start with and when selected they turn to black. The selected home button blends into the logo so you don't really know it's selected.

The text at the bottom is nice. Good size too.

guitarplayer08
March 12th, 2006, 03:11 PM
When I look at the site with another computer, those colors are kinda too bright.

bashR
March 12th, 2006, 06:37 PM
good stuff. try changing the fonts on the main menu, it doesn't seem to fit. good job up until now, holla at us when your finished

guitarplayer08
March 13th, 2006, 04:47 PM
http://www.dsg4.com/04/extra/bitmap/stuff/04bit16.sit

http://www.dsg4.com/04/extra/bitmap/stuff/04bit17.sit

Those 2 fonts are what I need but those are mac fonts. I cant even open sit file. But I need those fonts. Is there a way to use it in my windows machine? :(