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Jeff Wheeler
March 8th, 2006, 08:04 PM
Heh, I just did this for a school project. I know it's much worse than usual, because I designed it very quickly without much (or any) planning except a five minute PS mockup.
http://nokrev.com/plant-project/
I'm still writing content, but what do you think of the design? Or better yet, what should I change before I turn it in Friday?
Anogar
March 8th, 2006, 08:17 PM
The type comes across as excessively spaced. Looks like the full right justify is causing it. I'd say tweak the font size in one direction or another (probably smaller). The fourth link seems to be broken, it spits you into a white sheet full of random code. It looks nice, I think you're on the right track. Keep it simple, just like you already are, and I think it'll go over quite well. Only thing I'd change is the text.
v2ikematu
March 8th, 2006, 08:19 PM
http://nokrev.com/plant-project/4-cotelydons-die.html
Old format: archives/%id%
/plant-project/4-cotelydons-die.html
Something happened. Yay!
Mwaha :) Pretty nice! :) was soft for eyes. nice to read.
Jeff Wheeler
March 8th, 2006, 08:25 PM
Yeah, the 404 page is something I was making for WP to catch old permalink styles, but I haven't gotten around to finishing it.
It'll be fixed soon. I'm working on the content. ;)
Oh, and thanks. :)
Templarian
March 8th, 2006, 10:21 PM
really nice work there Nokrev. Nice colors and very smooth HTML/CSS.
:)
Jeff Wheeler
March 8th, 2006, 10:23 PM
Thanks. :)
Krilnon
March 8th, 2006, 10:50 PM
The writing seems a bit informal for a science project.
Jeff Wheeler
March 8th, 2006, 11:00 PM
He's a funny teacher… I think he'll be amused. You should see the other ones. ;)
danielson
March 9th, 2006, 12:49 AM
I like it a lot. The typography is spot on.
matthewjumps
March 9th, 2006, 12:51 AM
its good for what it is...but its pretty basic really...:cross-eye
Jeff Wheeler
March 9th, 2006, 01:18 AM
Thanks. Yes, it's simple. I made it in an hour or so, as I said earlier. It'll impress him though, if I tell him it's xhtml and css valid. ;)
matthewjumps
March 9th, 2006, 01:19 AM
:beer: nice....like i say ... good ... simple ... but not mind-blowing :D
applejelly
March 9th, 2006, 02:26 AM
sweet...Its pleasing to my eye :)
Jeff Wheeler
March 9th, 2006, 04:26 PM
Thanks. That's sufficient. :)
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