Tell me what you think

[kingpin71]

Take a look at my very first flash site and tell me what you think.

PS....The links dont work yet, but you can get the generall idea.

The site (http://www.ls287pb.fsnet.co.uk)

[reverendflash]

kingpin:

I moved this to site check. You should get better responses here.

Revhttp://www.aulman.com/rev.gif

[mlk]

It does look like a nice clean layout

- try to use pixel fonts for everything, the text sometimes looks blurry
- make the scrollbar the same color as your page, it'll fit in much better

maybe add a bit of interaction ?

[kingpin71]

thanx for that :)

two questions:

1, Know a good site for Pixel fonts (apart from fontsforflash)

2, What sort of interactivity you thinking of?

[kamyab]

I think its a bad copy of joshuadavis.com 8]

[kingpin71]

LOL wondering how long it would be to work that out!!

[kamyab]

you should try to be original with your designs. its always best if you do your own work.

[kingpin71]

wooooo wooooo hold it...

This isn't my actuall site, lets just call it a project. Only took half hour lol

[Dj.Stigma]

If it's not supposed to be your website, why am i being linked to it when i press your "website" button?
and seriously, if you were trying to be funny, then i don't find this amusing. And if you were being serious about this, then i think it's the worst ripp-off i've ever seen in my life. This is just a terrible screenshot which you most probably imported into flash and added some easy-to-do button rollovers to it.

next time, try to be MORE original!

[NeoDreamer]

Why do you have to copy www.2advanced.com and make your intro text super small and hard to read?

[Dj.Stigma]

Seriously, i think you should just give up you 'career' as 'designer' and switch to something that is not as challenging for your originality.

And please try not to post any more ripps, it's starting to annoy me!