Intro 7 Released

[chrisclick]

Hi i have just relesed the intro 7 intro for my cats site!

wat do you think ! www.pencaderweb.co.uk/Intro7V1.htm (http://www.pencaderweb.co.uk/Intro7V1.htm)

Thanks u

[lunatic]

Moved to Showcase and Critiques ;)

[designapp]

hmm.... that is the most wierd photo placement I've every seen........ you have a long way to go mate....... cheers........

[skOOb]

needs some graphic work...lots i mean. seems to be just simple tweens. maybe use a different font also. very bare thus far.

[chrisclick]

Ok i have changed the font and picture place ment!

www.pencaderweb.co.uk/Intro7V1.htm

[Pharoh32]

:worried: hmmm....

The transition are too slow and jerky.
As for the design, It's just a box with 3 elements placed badly. I'm sure you have more creativity than that.

Play around with it. Try different effects with the photo. Maybe use it as a background image. Play with the type of font and the size.

[chrisclick]

ok ill go play around wiht
it

[chrisclick]

oh and can i ask " how to i play an MP3 from a button click?"

[lunatic]

You already asked that in another thread dedicated to the subject - stick with it. ;)

[Willofdarkness]

i don't mean to sound negative, but i think you have a lot to work on. a LOT to work on.

you're gonna need to study some modern graphic design and art, as you haven't used either of these in your intro.

[Willofdarkness]

well... i didn't realize you were 11.

so take as many art history classes as you can. by the time you graduate high school you will be very good at this.

[chrisclick]

At the moment in I.T. were doing Flash and dreamweaver!

so far i got a C :|

[applejelly]

lucky bugger....gets to do flash in I.T......stupid spreadsheets...*grumbles*

strange, I know a Chris Jones in my school, but he's not 11.

but seriously, keep at it, I had just turned 12 when I started, and a few months down the line, I'm not too bad ;)

Good luck ;)

[chrisclick]

my brother got a B in flash but hes 15

[stabiloboss]

The link is dead by the way...