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quiza
February 22nd, 2006, 01:43 PM
whut do u think? :q:

JoshuaJonah
February 22nd, 2006, 01:58 PM
pretty good, I would work on some shadows and shading to show the light sources, but otherwise, lots of nice detail. good work.

btw: that fence must have taken you a whole day.

jokun
February 22nd, 2006, 02:13 PM
looks good. like he said, though, it needs some shading. also, the windows in the bell tower need to be filled in with something. white makes them look kind of weird.

MoyArt
February 22nd, 2006, 03:22 PM
From Mexico!!!!!!!1 dude im from mexico too Nice Work btw quedo pocamadre!!!!!

Saludos!!!

freeskier89
February 22nd, 2006, 08:16 PM
Wow! That is very nice. It has a lot of detail. Add some shading and it will be a very very nice entry :hugegrin:

Skunkycomics
February 22nd, 2006, 08:54 PM
yeah thats really detailed - lines are perfect!

Dislexsick
February 23rd, 2006, 01:20 AM
Does it fit the plot size? it may just be me but it looks a little bit too big on the Y Axis (I think it's Y.....)

kirupa
February 23rd, 2006, 01:22 AM
Does it fit the plot size? it may just be me but it looks a little bit too big on the Y Axis (I think it's Y.....)
It is too big, but if it neatly fits across two plots (a 2x2 and a 1x2), I can make an exception :block:

Like everyone else said, some shading would definitely make it even better!

JoshuaJonah
February 23rd, 2006, 01:23 AM
I believe this is worth an exception.

freeskier89
February 23rd, 2006, 01:26 AM
I believe this is worth an exception. Agreed :thumb:

Especially once you add some shading :P

SlowRoasted
February 23rd, 2006, 01:48 AM
veddy nice, def needs some shading.

quiza
February 23rd, 2006, 01:32 PM
Thanks you for your comments (gracias por tus comentarios saludos el compatriota!! y la la demas raza), really are very inspired to keep going, i worked and i did some changes, this Caterdal is from my city and i luv it, have a spanic style,

le me show you the changes .

¿a little bit better?
http://www.utc.edu.mx/previos/a/saltillo_catedral.gif

SlowRoasted
February 23rd, 2006, 03:18 PM
Much better. I think you can go a little further with the shading/shadows. It's still a bit flat looking.

quiza
February 24th, 2006, 01:28 PM
http://www.utc.edu.mx/previos/a/saltillo2_catedral.gif
Hi, thanks for you comments, i have a confesion , i have no idea whut is a FLAT and i dunno how made shadows :block: , i did that modification but i dunno if is correct.

Any opinión? (im block) ::embarrased::

kirupa
February 24th, 2006, 02:05 PM
You could think of something that is flat as lacking depth. The following attached image might help.

The first image is flat because you can't figure out whether the shape is two-dimensional or three-dimensional. In the next image, though, because of the shading, you can tell which side is closer to you, where the light source is, etc. At the least, you can safely guess that the second image is three-dimensional.

Portions of your entry look like the first image, but by ensuring that the shading is consistently implemented throughout your entry, you could have one of the better buildings in kVille :)

jokun
February 24th, 2006, 02:12 PM
kind of like this. it makes an object look more three dimensional

*ETA* never mind. spanked by Kirupa

quiza
February 24th, 2006, 03:52 PM
Thank you , really i apreciate your help pals
let me work in that =)

Pasquale
February 25th, 2006, 07:45 PM
you could even get rid of the black outlines and make them a darker tone of the building !

Dislexsick
February 26th, 2006, 07:08 AM
I rekon we could have a winner with this one. (my poor entry ;( )

hybrid101
February 26th, 2006, 10:50 AM
nice. very nice! colors are very good in the last pic

quiza
March 2nd, 2006, 02:40 PM
Hi , im here again, i worked with the Catedral from Saltillo and i did this one.

http://www.utc.edu.mx/previos/a/catedral_quiza2.gif

thanks for the tutos, explication about the shadows :rabbit: really they help me .:beer:

what do you think about this design?

kirupa
March 2nd, 2006, 03:48 PM
The shading work is much better. It looks a little darker now, but I tend to like brighter-colored things anyway :P

quiza
March 2nd, 2006, 04:02 PM
Thank you Kirupa for yoy comments, i saw the colors and i give them i little bit more (relly this technique is very hard) :trout: lol, but is interesting,
http://www.utc.edu.mx/previos/a/catedral_quiza3.gif

(i have dreams with them) lol !!

evljeenyiss
March 6th, 2006, 09:41 PM
whut do u think? :q:

AWESOME, except for black lines. I would use a darker color of the shade used in the building. You'd be surprised how much more professional it will look.

e-sarbak
March 9th, 2006, 12:46 PM
Yes, try to get rid of the black lines. It would make it look much more softer...:)