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GPP
February 18th, 2006, 03:32 PM
Its a start... need some feedback and constructive critisism :cons:


Updates:

1.1 Update (WINDOW SHADING FIX)
1.2 Update (WINDOW CORNER FIX)
1.3 Update (COLOR FIXING)
1.4 Magor Update (BUILDING FIX, COLOR FIX, WINDOW FIX, WINDOW LEDGE, GOOGLE TEXTURING FIX)
enjoibp3
February 18th, 2006, 04:33 PM
Its a start... need some feedback and constructive critisism :cons:

i like:P but i'd say to shade the window on the same sides as the building that way it looks even better:beam:
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 05:23 PM
^ Thanks that makez more sense...
Seb Hughes
February 18th, 2006, 05:24 PM
Very creative there.
Jeff Wheeler
February 18th, 2006, 05:28 PM
Add more Windows® :thumb:

Try making the word "Google" a bit bigger and more legible. Also… have you ever seen gray on Google? They're full of very bright colors.
Jeff Wheeler
February 18th, 2006, 05:35 PM
Err… it's still gray. I'm talking about the entire building…
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 05:35 PM
Woops lol :D.... cause you see I was doing some editing and it went all grey... any color suggestions?
Jeff Wheeler
February 18th, 2006, 05:36 PM
Why'd you delete your post?
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 05:36 PM
I dont know... I feel bad about error :D so I deleted it
kirupa
February 18th, 2006, 05:42 PM
The window corner and the building corner don't seem to line up. Besides that and some color work, good entry =)
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 05:43 PM
^ Ok kirupa ill fix that up :D
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 05:50 PM
Anybody have some suggestions for color?
thesparky007
February 18th, 2006, 06:16 PM
the door lines are not very good
kirupa
February 18th, 2006, 10:28 PM
Making the walls lighter would make the Google text stand out a bit more also :)
Seb Hughes
February 18th, 2006, 10:45 PM
Making the walls lighter would make the Google text stand out a bit more also :)
Yea i agreee
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 10:53 PM
^ ok ill start makin it lighter
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 11:02 PM
I have changed the color :cons:

Tell me if you think its better....
Jeff Wheeler
February 18th, 2006, 11:06 PM
Isn't that color called poop?
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 11:07 PM
Good or bad?
Jeff Wheeler
February 18th, 2006, 11:08 PM
Make it white… with it glowing blue, or something. :P
Seb Hughes
February 18th, 2006, 11:14 PM
too light even harder to read now
esnetni
February 18th, 2006, 11:21 PM
yea it is a good entry good job.
GPP
February 18th, 2006, 11:52 PM
Thankz Forq...

Ok I'm trying out new colors maby a nice baby blue or a white
Pasquale
February 19th, 2006, 01:54 AM
white would be nice- but make the door angled correctly
Shoo
February 19th, 2006, 09:37 AM
lol Gas13 tutorials much? :P
I like it it's great but i think you could go to the google site and use the same colours as the actual google logo that would help people out if they couldn't read it then the colours might give them a hint :ko:
also try putting a ledge on the window even if its very small it will make it look loads better trust me
at the risk of sounding repetative: I realy like it

EDIT: sorry just realised that the colours are actualy the right colours :lol:
GPP
February 19th, 2006, 11:46 AM
Mmmkay... yeah the colors were right the whole time.... lol..... ill try putting a legdge...
GPP
February 19th, 2006, 02:57 PM
Updated 1.4
enjoibp3
February 20th, 2006, 12:18 AM
i'd say now looks great :beer:
J
February 20th, 2006, 01:08 PM
good entry
Seb Hughes
February 20th, 2006, 03:20 PM
Much nicer, :D
GPP
February 20th, 2006, 10:08 PM
Ok thx guyz... :D
Pasquale
February 25th, 2006, 07:19 PM
the word google looks too smooth ahaha but thats still nice