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GPP
02-18-2006, 02:32 PM
Its a start... need some feedback and constructive critisism :cons:


Updates:

1.1 Update (WINDOW SHADING FIX)
1.2 Update (WINDOW CORNER FIX)
1.3 Update (COLOR FIXING)
1.4 Magor Update (BUILDING FIX, COLOR FIX, WINDOW FIX, WINDOW LEDGE, GOOGLE TEXTURING FIX)

enjoibp3
02-18-2006, 03:33 PM
Its a start... need some feedback and constructive critisism :cons:

i like:P but i'd say to shade the window on the same sides as the building that way it looks even better:beam:

GPP
02-18-2006, 04:23 PM
^ Thanks that makez more sense...

Seb Hughes
02-18-2006, 04:24 PM
Very creative there.

Jeff Wheeler
02-18-2006, 04:28 PM
Add more Windows® :thumb:

Try making the word "Google" a bit bigger and more legible. Also… have you ever seen gray on Google? They're full of very bright colors.

Jeff Wheeler
02-18-2006, 04:35 PM
Err… it's still gray. I'm talking about the entire building…

GPP
02-18-2006, 04:35 PM
Woops lol :D.... cause you see I was doing some editing and it went all grey... any color suggestions?

Jeff Wheeler
02-18-2006, 04:36 PM
Why'd you delete your post?

GPP
02-18-2006, 04:36 PM
I dont know... I feel bad about error :D so I deleted it

kirupa
02-18-2006, 04:42 PM
The window corner and the building corner don't seem to line up. Besides that and some color work, good entry =)

GPP
02-18-2006, 04:43 PM
^ Ok kirupa ill fix that up :D

GPP
02-18-2006, 04:50 PM
Anybody have some suggestions for color?

thesparky007
02-18-2006, 05:16 PM
the door lines are not very good

kirupa
02-18-2006, 09:28 PM
Making the walls lighter would make the Google text stand out a bit more also :)

Seb Hughes
02-18-2006, 09:45 PM
Making the walls lighter would make the Google text stand out a bit more also :)
Yea i agreee

GPP
02-18-2006, 09:53 PM
^ ok ill start makin it lighter

GPP
02-18-2006, 10:02 PM
I have changed the color :cons:

Tell me if you think its better....

Jeff Wheeler
02-18-2006, 10:06 PM
Isn't that color called poop?

GPP
02-18-2006, 10:07 PM
Good or bad?

Jeff Wheeler
02-18-2006, 10:08 PM
Make it white… with it glowing blue, or something. :P

Seb Hughes
02-18-2006, 10:14 PM
too light even harder to read now

esnetni
02-18-2006, 10:21 PM
yea it is a good entry good job.

GPP
02-18-2006, 10:52 PM
Thankz Forq...

Ok I'm trying out new colors maby a nice baby blue or a white

Pasquale
02-19-2006, 12:54 AM
white would be nice- but make the door angled correctly

Shoo
02-19-2006, 08:37 AM
lol Gas13 tutorials much? :P
I like it it's great but i think you could go to the google site and use the same colours as the actual google logo that would help people out if they couldn't read it then the colours might give them a hint :ko:
also try putting a ledge on the window even if its very small it will make it look loads better trust me
at the risk of sounding repetative: I realy like it

EDIT: sorry just realised that the colours are actualy the right colours :lol:

GPP
02-19-2006, 10:46 AM
Mmmkay... yeah the colors were right the whole time.... lol..... ill try putting a legdge...

GPP
02-19-2006, 01:57 PM
Updated 1.4

enjoibp3
02-19-2006, 11:18 PM
i'd say now looks great :beer:

J
02-20-2006, 12:08 PM
good entry

Seb Hughes
02-20-2006, 02:20 PM
Much nicer, :D

GPP
02-20-2006, 09:08 PM
Ok thx guyz... :D

Pasquale
02-25-2006, 06:19 PM
the word google looks too smooth ahaha but thats still nice