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BigSilly
February 17th, 2006, 06:52 PM
www.griffinaudiousa.com

I'm pretty green when it comes to flash, but i managed to put this site together - i still have to put in image galleries below the speakers...i'm just glad it works!

Let me know if it takes forever for the site to open. Thanks!

master_phat
February 17th, 2006, 07:14 PM
not bad... speed up the fps to atleast 30 and it should be 10X more sexier.

GPP
February 17th, 2006, 07:17 PM
Very nice! Very creative! *hands BigSilly a cookie*

BigSilly
February 17th, 2006, 07:39 PM
not bad... speed up the fps to atleast 30 and it should be 10X more sexier.

Thanks for the advice - now it looks more like a REAL flash site!

GPP
February 17th, 2006, 08:33 PM
Yeha 30 fps lookz way betta

dec27
February 17th, 2006, 10:23 PM
I really like it!

It is neat and clean, the menu is an original one, the navigation is good.

good work!

:thumb2:

SimplyArun
February 17th, 2006, 10:48 PM
this is absolutely great for a first flash site!

One point though - the "home" button that appears in the sub-pages should be made more obvious in the navigation. Try repositioning it or giving it a different make-over. Get creative! It took me a while to notice that it was there.

good work anyway! :thumb2:

designapp
February 18th, 2006, 08:47 AM
www.griffinaudiousa.com (http://www.griffinaudiousa.com)

I'm pretty green when it comes to flash, but i managed to put this site together - i still have to put in image galleries below the speakers...i'm just glad it works!

Let me know if it takes forever for the site to open. Thanks!

hmm, I think you need to improve the navigational part.. Remember, you are desiging a website, not a cdrom. so there is no reason why I need to keep on going back home.

Overall, this site is just showing the skill, but no concern on contents and navigational approach...... i just hate site that expect me to load PDF for every single one........

But, for a first timer, it is good and impressive....... but we are getting into this kind of problem where people are so concern about using CSS, Flash and all knot but forgot about the contents layout and usability......... cheers

unchew
February 18th, 2006, 09:03 AM
I do like it, and it's so good that I don't care about going home every time or watching the pdfs. You just need to click on the pdfs if you are interested...so its ok! good work! A+! :P

unclesond
February 18th, 2006, 02:44 PM
I think the navigation is fine for such a small site....if it had more sections it would become a problem. Keep the PDF button there, but perhaps just display the price too....

As most people said make the home button a little bit more obvious

Also the G1 speaker, those images that come in at the bottom, they look a bit naff (ah man i hate feathered edges like that :| ) compared to the rest of the uber slick site.

Good work. Score for a first time 8.5/10

Templarian
February 18th, 2006, 02:58 PM
Home = Back is all i could think of. Very good for what you had to work with.

The Pete One
February 19th, 2006, 11:01 PM
Cool and creative, but I think you could pick better fonts for the quotes at the start, also the description text is a little too large for me, as is the Griffin logo. I would cut that size down by at least 50%.