kVille Submission: The Kirupascraper

[Esherido]

hi this is my first submission to kVille!
I know u don't like buildings being too tall but please make an exception for me! :)

I hope you like it!

EDIT: I removed the 1st picture because I didn't want to take up too much space on ur server!

Maybe later i'll do some transparent light coming out. I kinda like the plain draps, don't want it to look really fancy and stuff, besides I've already spent 10+ hours on it!

Oh, and please tell me what u think of the guy hanging himself and the assasin on the top floor?

[kirupa]

If you cut the building's height to about 300 pixels, that would work better. Having tall buildings means that any buildings behind that of yours cannot be seen.

Besides that, try adding some detail to the grass and even the glass on the building. The black shadow/driveway thing on the right looks out of place. It also goes outside the boundary of the plot area ;)

[Esherido]

sure! I knida wanted the tallest building though, but oh well I'll cut off 300 px or so. And i'll definitely add some detail to the windows; I just kinda wanted some feedback right now. It's still in a "Beta." Thanks for replying so quickly. Ill probably just remove the driveway and put a helipad on top instead! :)

[hybrid101]

what's that gray thing near the door supposed to be?

[CreationsCentre]

what's that gray thing near the door supposed to be?

I believe it's supposed to be a path leading to the main doors. :ponder:

[e-sarbak]

That is too simple
maybe you should add some more details

[Shoo]

I have an idea, you could put little scenes behind some of the windows
Little funny things like a guy hanging himself, or a boyfriend and girlfriend spliting up, or two people fighting over the remote :thumb:

[enjoibp3]

I have an idea, you could put little scenes behind some of the windows
Little funny things like a guy hanging himself, or a boyfriend and girlfriend spliting up, or two people fighting over the remote :thumb:

haha agreed.:lol:

[Esherido]

Yeah im already working on some detail. Some of the windows have drapes on them and one of them will have an assassin poking out. I also removed the "gray thing" near the door.

[Seb Hughes]

Looks ok, the path looks wierd.

[Esherido]

Ok I added some blinds and a little terrorist/assassin dude at the top. Please tell me what u think! :) Oh and I know the head is a little big too, ill shrink it in the next version. NOTE: Still deciding.. if I shrink ppl might not know what it is anyway.

[Shoo]

Different colors of curtains + patterns on them (must have nessesity for curtains) I'm a curtain expert
Do some light bits on the windows to make them look shiny (E.g.- my biach of a Kville entry)

Eat the taco on entry with lots of catapillars :pleased:

[Skunkycomics]

nice - how about a helicopter pad on the roof?

[SlowRoasted]

I'm not feeling the curtains at all.

[Shoo]

The idea was that you would be able to see through the glass and the scenes happening on the inside :stunned:
I like the assasin but the guy should be hanging himself inside ... or failing that just put someone about to jump off the roof :krazy:
i think the curtains are good but they look like they are outside the window if you put some light streaks like I sugested over the window it would make them look like they were inside ... it think :puzzle:

[G]

Maybe later i'll do some transparent light coming out. I kinda like the plain draps, don't want it to look really fancy and stuff, besides I've already spent 10+ hours on it!

Oh, and please tell me what u think of the guy hanging himself and the assasin on the top floor?

it seemed to be just an ordinary pleasent looking building....then a few bad people whowed up :lol:

its good but like the K' man said its pretty big.

[GPP]

I still like it plain lol...

[Pasquale]

halve the height and add details- fix the front door :P

[Esherido]

Sorry guys but I'm super busy right now, sorry for not posting in a while. I'll probably start working on it again over the summer. Thanks for the advice though! :)

[pravinroche]

show some reflection or some flare on the building glass well u have to shorten the building.

[Esherido]

Just a little reminder, I will not be here for another month. So whatever you say, it's going to have to wait.

[BS]

ready yet?

[Esherido]

Nope. And please don't turn this thread into a discussion one like mikeDB's one. :a:

[BS]

:diss: owww