Please... help me improve it!

[pedro.paulo]

Hi, friends!

This site is 90% done... Well. Critiques are wellcome!!

http://www.ppwebart.com

Thanks a lot!!

(Oh!! I almost forget it: my problem now is make the "ink" bottle works like a button by "bookmark this site!", but I don´t know HOW in Flash 8..)

[JoshuaJonah]

1. The yellows clash.
2. pencils look too fake (opinion).
3. The font on the menu/options is aweful.
4. The content text is way too small.
5. Lacks a little consistency.

[thats all folks]

To be honest I like the splash page better, The size would be cool for a folio, The fonts used on the splash are really hard to read and on the inner pages. I would like a better conformation that the enter button is an enter button. The light alpha fade is not used well, I would when you role over, have the circle draw around it. No need for a pop window either!! The inner pages are a good start, but need some work!!!


Keep up the good job!!!!

[applejelly]

1. The yellows clash.
2. pencils look too fake (opinion).
3. The font on the menu/options is aweful.
4. The content text is way too small.
5. Lacks a little consistency.

ditto, If you want to do that pencil pen cliché thing, then do it properly, and scan pencil and paper in.

[applejelly]

1. The yellows clash.
2. pencils look too fake (opinion).
3. The font on the menu/options is aweful.
4. The content text is way too small.
5. Lacks a little consistency.
ditto, If you want to do that pencil pen cliché thing, then do it properly, and scan pencil and paper in.

:luigi::mario:

[pedro.paulo]

Hey, guys!!!

First of all.. thanks a lot!!! and...

1) Yes, I will fix the font size
2) well... the pencil... I will think in another way of improve that.. I thought that a simple "take a photo and put it that" gives me a bad impression... Maybe I delete that... Let´s see.. (thanks, Deffective for your opinion...)
3) the "yellow".. What yellow? By "Index.htm", the "bgTable" or both????? rssss.
4) The "enter button". Yes! You´re right, I will fix that!
5) The pop-up.. well... I was scared about the "resolution" (800*600 X 1024*768). Do you think I need to resize the "stage" and use a 400*300 size? This is the reason for the popUP content.. I also do not like that... I will think in something...
6) Applejelly... my english is poor (as you can see here..). I didn´t get your message. Could you help me? (:be: )

Guys!!

Thank you very much! As I fixed those things I´ll put here the results!!!

[B L U E]

Not bad. I think you should do something about the background texture, however. When I saw it, I immediately thought photoshop filter. Nice start though!