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sean1983uk
January 21st, 2006, 09:35 AM
Hey there!

Just working on what eventually will be my portfolio site, its by no means anywhere near finished but just thought i'd get some feedback on it so far while its still easier to change.

So have a look and tell me what you think,

http://www.seanbridger.serveftp.net/

This is my first fully flash site so all feedback is greatly appreciated.

Cheers

Sean

jonbid
January 21st, 2006, 10:08 AM
i like it, i think its a clean layout.

i understand you have not yet completed it, i am sure you have thought about these things already, but they are what stands out to me:

* personally, i am not keen on the font you have in capitals the greek type one.
* in the animations, maybe introduce some easing?
* i would like to see some stronger colours.
* center the movie vertically on the screen?
* speed up the transition on the thumbnails on the right side of the screen.
* you have an "untitled" title.

all are my personal preferences, so maybe they aren't to everyones taste.

:beam:

jon

sean1983uk
January 21st, 2006, 10:18 AM
i like it, i think its a clean layout.

i understand you have not yet completed it, i am sure you have thought about these things already, but they are what stands out to me:

* personally, i am not keen on the font you have in capitals the greek type one.
* in the animations, maybe introduce some easing?
* i would like to see some stronger colours.
* center the movie vertically on the screen?
* speed up the transition on the thumbnails on the right side of the screen.
* you have an "untitled" title.

all are my personal preferences, so maybe they aren't to everyones taste.

:beam:

jon

Hi there many thanks for your quick reply :)

to be honest I forgot completely about the "untitled" title so thanks for pointing that out.

and the others points will all hopefulll be addressed as i complete the site, just wanted to get a general feel for it at the moment.

Many thanks again

Sean

ApixDesigns
January 21st, 2006, 06:02 PM
5!+3 du|\| \/\/3R|<

phorte
January 21st, 2006, 06:18 PM
broken link.?

sean1983uk
January 22nd, 2006, 08:43 AM
broken link.?

should be up again, sorry. :)

hybrid101
January 22nd, 2006, 09:00 AM
it looks simple and clean, i like it!
btw add sounds, it's pretty boring without them

sean1983uk
January 22nd, 2006, 10:33 AM
it looks simple and clean, i like it!
btw add sounds, it's pretty boring without them

Hi hybrid,

Yeh will be adding sounds eventually, just not found any that i like yet, thanks for your comment:)

phorte
January 22nd, 2006, 07:13 PM
Hi hybrid,

Yeh will be adding sounds eventually, just not found any that i like yet, thanks for your comment:)
flashkit.com thats where i always go for my sound fx's

Looks nice btw. Maybe a little bit too plain, splash a bit of colour in. Maybe have a different colour for each of the rollovers?

sean1983uk
January 26th, 2006, 07:57 AM
taken the site down while I do some work on it. Back up soon :)