Ron cartavio, i would linke your critics

[inz]

this is my first post here.. i would like youir oppinions

http://inz.zonaz.net/cartavio/nuevo/

go into the section on the left..

thank you

i appreciate your comments.. and critics.

[i will learn fl]

Dude thats a great site. Love the transitions. Really nice colors and the transitions are great

[inz]

thanks dude.. and well. its even on develop.. i hope it will finish ok.. anyone. who could give some. nice or sincere words? :)

[.RobinK]

Looks good but still needs a little touch here and there.
Little stuff like the logo being distorted from the moment you "enter" the room.

Anyway, quite a nice job.

[BoonDock]

Pretty nice! :thumb: some of the "movie" transitions are a little too pixelated, but thats just being picky to help ya out! Other than that, I don't see much to critique on...good job!

[gvozden]

really great site

[inz]

thank you. for your words.. and yes about the logo ineed it on vector.. so it will not get pixelated :(.. i will work on this.. and show you more improvements.. thanks for your words!!..

[wheatleyweb]

yes... looks good overall... i have the same comment about the logo, so no need to go there.... but i did notice a couple other things you might check out:

- when you go inside, and click on the bartender, it zooms to her and displays a recipe, but its too big and i cannot read the entire recipe. At least thats how it looks on my comp.
- and i think you might need to make the backout buttons more obvious... in fact i couldnt even find the backout button when zoomed into the bartender. I had to refresh the page to get out of it?

wheatleyweb

[valvika]

Looks good.

[inz]

thanks guys for your words....
heres its the pag

http://inz.zonaz.net/cartavio/nuevo/

with more improvements.. the logo.. i am waiting for the vectorial version hehehe LOL.. to change it..

check in.. the "casa cartavio".. and the barwoman. and the bottles on the left..

thanks

[inz]

thank you all guys for your words.. i am working to finish it..

[chriskalani]

here's mine:

The girl working behind the bar looked cute from a far... but then when I went closer she was ugly. There is my opinion.