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innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 07:05 AM
Hi all, this is the first time I've tried to doing a vector, and it's completely done from scratch by myself, no references whatsoever. Please comment! :blush:

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8059/saint9up.jpg
Berg
January 6th, 2006, 07:22 AM
nice one, waiting for more ;]
next time do something with more detail.
innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 08:25 AM
nice one, waiting for more ;]
next time do something with more detail.

Hi, thanks for the encouragement!

Because I've only just started, I didn't know what details to put in, or how? Could you suggest some?
Berg
January 6th, 2006, 08:51 AM
- shadows - you can suggest ripples on that gown
- more colour
- wrinkles here and there...
innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 08:57 AM
- shadows - you can suggest ripples on that gown
- more colour
- wrinkles here and there...

I have a bit of a problem with wrinkles on clothing (because i never have any idea where to put them). Can you suggest anything, or any tutorial? Thanks!
innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 10:13 AM
Updated in color:

http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3731/saintcolored4mb.jpg
Ordinathorreur
January 6th, 2006, 11:30 AM
Dude, that's sweet!

Well, except that, for some inexplicable reason, you decided to put the date in there :ponder:
innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 11:32 AM
Dude, that's sweet!

Well, except that, for some inexplicable reason, you decided to put the date in there :ponder:

It's to remind myself when i did it. Guess I'm too used to writing dates on art pieces :p
senocular
January 6th, 2006, 11:33 AM
looking back at older stuff Ive done, sometimes I wish I included the date.
~The Who~
January 6th, 2006, 02:01 PM
- It reminds me of art that you would see on Hallmark cards. It's refreshing...good job. =)
innoxist
January 6th, 2006, 09:44 PM
- It reminds me of art that you would see on Hallmark cards. It's refreshing...good job. =)

Thank you :}
.soulty
January 6th, 2006, 10:04 PM
i like it :thumb: nice work. might be a little nicer with some wrinkles but then again its fine as it is.. maybe try the character in a different position now ;)
dale
January 6th, 2006, 10:05 PM
lol i think he meant you put the date in such an odd spot - ie it's more common to have it down the bottom...

but good job nonetheless - very clean... :beam:
hybrid101
January 7th, 2006, 12:36 AM
wow, that's a nice vector piece. i'd suggest putting mor detail on the clothes
innoxist
January 7th, 2006, 10:46 PM
Thank you all ^_^ I did it mainly to see if I was completely hopeless at it. Guess I'll work harder from now on :}