AHDesign: My new porfolio site

[andizzle]

Aight homies, here is my site:

www.freewebs.com/ahdesign

I know the music stops, but I haven't really figured it out yet. The code is:


music = new Sound();
music.setVolume(25);
music.loadSound("http://www.freewebs.com/ahdesign/intro.mp3", true);
music.start(0, 999999);

I want it to loop, but it's not. :puzzle:

And I just noticed, the preloader doesn't really work. It loads, and then it shows up and tells me the entire thing loaded. I gotta figure it out.


So, I need some advice. Is there anything wrong? And when I say "anything," I'm talking ANYTHING here. Be really honest, and bash it as much as you can. :D

[Pasquale]

advice on what though?

[andizzle]

I dunno, like how to improve it. Like, what's wrong with it?

[kwigbo]

var music:Sound = new Sound();
music.attachSound("music");
music.start();
music.onSoundComplete = function() {
music.start();
};


That's how I make a loop. But the music is really annoying.(Just my opinion.)
To many scan lines. I think you need more solid color to break it up. Your buttons arent separated from each other enough. Try putting something in between them to separate them. Keep tryin.

[danulf]

tone the scanlines down a bit, they show too much, makes it harder to read.
Then I actually think the text and menu is too big...

[theflash]

Menu is like a continuous statement... not easy to get attention... So work on menu and as danulf said ... scanline should be lighter...

Also menu mouse over is barely visible so it's also making diffucult to figure out the menu buttons... try reworking on menu

[applejelly]

Its not too bad...but that could all be done in HTML?

[Ineedsleep]

I dont like your site the test is too big and the font is too square and the scanlines are too bold and the colours are dull and the roll over is pointless. HOWEVER I really like the work you have there particularly 'what do guns do?' I can see what you were going for but I would try and tone those things down and it would work for me.

[andizzle]

Oh wow, thank you all so much! I will work on those things this week! (Although I'll probably be playing WoW like 6 hours a day)

Thanks,
Andy

[BoonDock]

Um, it was all quite big...and um, the loader loaded too late, at like 96% etc. Alright for a start though.