FLASHTOWN

[Eduard Ch]

my new portfolio site !!!

http://www.flashtown.org

site - 350 KB
music - 1 Mb

[deletedUser459]

very excellent indeed! :thumb:

i love how the site pauses when you click on something from the protofolion

[wo1olf]

Your site rocks!!! Keep up the good work....

[SPAD3S]

Love it clean animation is nice Splended

[ElectricGrandpa]

I like pretty much everything about it... except you really shouldn't start sentences(or paragraphs, for that matter), with "So". I know it's picky, but because it's right at the start it might turn some people off...

Also, when the "scrolls" are blank, you should really write the name of the section on them, maybe vertically or something, but they just seem so... blank... at first.

-Matt

[j_polo9]

Ahh seems pretty cool but i wouldn't put it up there with your best work. It's nice that the file size is so small but i think the concept could use some more work. I don't get the point of the background texture it makes it look like a street or the ground. I don't like the navigation how you have to go past the other pages to get to the one you want. Maybe if you added a cool effect like the other pages flew by supper quick with some tweening. Also not a fan of the typography or portfolio display but then again i love the work in the portfolio. The about me also seems too bland maybe add some bold or all cap words or pictures or something to inspire the reader to read it all.

[BoonDock]

I think it looks pretty kewl, but I'm not sure if the background fits with the rest of the site. Also the landscape in the clouds, that whole structure or what have you, what is that exactly for? Just for an eye catcher? It would be kewl if you could possibly interact with it, or something happened with it when you went to each section. Oh and watch your spelling. Saw a few words in there that were either spelled wrong or didn't quite fit. The site overall is kewl, but I just think some aspects of it don't fit well together. Impressive portfolio though.

[Ordinathorreur]

Ooooh, the motorjeans dude!

It wasn't clear to me what type of project could be found under which roll. So you might want to make that more prominent/bolder or, if possible, put it at the top of each roll. I also don't really like the papyrus font (or variation thereof) that you've used. Perhaps also make one open automatically when you enter that section, perhaps your favourite/best work, maybe anuimation or so? I would try and change the distance between your sections, it takes a while to move to each one and you lose your main object when going to the top ones, which leaves it quite plain.
All in all, I have to say it's a bit of a strange site. The styles used are a little conflicting. You have egyptian stuff in there, fantasy stuff, Motorbikes, castles, clouds, desert, green trees etc. I think you had a good idea, then tried to scrape together a bunch of things that might fit into that style, leaving you with something that doesn't really complement itself.

[Eduard Ch]

I have decided to change a font in the menu, color and figure around of a site, I shall a little change navigation in section of a portfolio. And in the future I shall probably alter island and I shall add animations ...

[slinkyart]

I like your site. Very different. Very original. :thumb: x 2

I don't know if this was mentioned above, but what about the possibility of being able to click on stuff on the mountain and it zooms in nice and close...kind of like "easter eggs" on your site.

Great work!

[Zach-E2]

neat, man! :thumb2:

[Eduard Ch]

I has altered navigation in section of a portfolio , main font and text about me.