hawk design // v1 // freedom

[Hawk]

http://jellomirage.tripod.com/index_hawk.html

peace
hawk-freedom

[ironikart]

did you want some feedback on that little intro? :-\

I don't think it's loading the rest of the site after the intro, maybe it's just me...

[Hawk]

ahh yes, i forgot to explain sry...

all this is so far is the intro lol
i would expect that to confuse some people seeing that they didnt know..

and yea, if you wanna comment that would be cool


hawk-freedom

[Soul]

Nice so far :)

- Soul :s:

[Lynx]

There's not much to critique on, but it looks good =)

[andr.in]

one thing though! The big blue text is selectable! maybe it'd be better if it was just a graphic!

[mdipi]

wow dude so far so good! and yeah syko i noticed that too.

[prstudio]

pretty cool

the beginning horizontal line threw me off though..didn't know the movie extended that far...also the hesitation before it flies off of the screen...is a little jerky...i see the effect...but its a little too jerky..

i like the colors and the shapes a lot. perhaps if the background color was different?

good work.

[mdipi]

Yeah that is really jerky...i think a higher fram rate would do it..

[hojo]

yep, looks good so far, as i say on almost everyones thing i see (maybe im mentally slow or something) it could use a touch higher frame rate to speed things up a bit.