Animation Portfolio Site

[twfarley]

Be harsh!

http://www.tommywfarley.com

-TWF

[psykovsky]

I hate those default flash souds, site is interesting only first 2 minutes... Oh, and the dog in your animations looks like total copy of JoeCartoon ones...

[SPAD3S]

Forget Psyko i like the site the sounds might be a but too much but its good

[slinkyart]

Umm...well, it's okay. It loads very slowly. The animation is very choppy.

[slinkyart]

Welcome to the boards btw.

[applejelly]

Try to intergrate your videos into the site, people hate to download stuff that their only gonna watch once (unless they like it) And as psyko said, it does get annoying after a while, and you dont know where your going. Maybe add some directional text? Also, try to make an alternative for people who just want to see work, quickly and easily. Maybe a text based version? Its a really good site, and shows your flash skills, but its not that user friendly. Keep working on it, and you'll soon have the perfect site :D

Welcome to Kirupa!

[theflash]

Yeah animation is choppy try looking for better frame rate and timing...

[BoonDock]

It's a great idea, but you need to keep things smooth and flowing. The animations as said before seem choppy and not played out to the full potential. I think you have a good honest approach but need to refine the flash skills, or just put more time into it to make everything seem a bit more professional. I understand the need for everything to be in a vector shape, but at the same time you could pull things off such as the newspaper and such with photoshop to make them look better. (i've never seen that grey of a newspaper before) Also you might want to make some text over the buttons so you know what is what. (the apple as a back button, the lighter as a back button and so on) Other than that, like I said great attempt at something original but just refine a few things here and there and it would be a lot better.

[twfarley]

Thanks for all the crits, will be back when I have them completed.