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ileana
October 21st, 2005, 02:15 PM
hy, this is my first flash site.

www.argentine-pampa.com

Hope you all like it.
Ile
applejelly
October 21st, 2005, 02:45 PM
:stare: thats your first...woa! that is OUTSTANDING for a first. only thing I wouldchange is the text in the menu.
danulf
October 21st, 2005, 02:49 PM
freakin awesome for a first try man! :thumb:
BoonDock
October 21st, 2005, 02:59 PM
Very good attempt at a first flash site. I'd get rid of the mouse follower. They are just not needed. But everything seems to work fairly well. The design is even alright. Good job.
creativeFuzion
October 21st, 2005, 03:56 PM
I like it, besides form the mouse trail. (those things drive me crazy) :tb:

~Philip
ileana
October 21st, 2005, 04:19 PM
thanks to all of you. I have to make clear that i had been doing several things in flash before this. Iīm very far from being a flash geniuos jejejej. Though i{m very proud of my xml gallery.
GPP
October 21st, 2005, 04:29 PM
Holy F:red:

Thats awsome.. my first one was .. uh quite embarising
TheCanadian
October 21st, 2005, 04:42 PM
I don't like the menu buttons.
The falling leaves aren't that good either. Right now as soon as they reach a point they immediately move the opposite direction. It would be nice to see them curve like a wave.
It's a pretty good first site :thumb:.
ileana
October 21st, 2005, 04:48 PM
youīre right canadian. If you or anyone, have an action script idea for the falling leaves i would apreciate it.

well, about the text menu. I had lost all of my imagination by that time. I just put the glow, i couldnīt think of anything that wouldnīt add too much visual weight to the whole thing. All right all right i have no excuse, i didnīt know what to do with the menu jejejejje :azn:
Zach-E2
October 21st, 2005, 05:14 PM
dude, you put us all to shame!
if that's your first, i'd hate to see how good you are in even 6 months time!
holy crap! you're good!
Dae
October 21st, 2005, 09:29 PM
Great job, thats a pretty good site - let alone a first flash site.

The only thing not mentioned that I would personally change is that little logo in the bottom right of the content box. Its a good logo, but I would fix the choppiness. I'd take that into Photoshop, smoothen the edges with an eraser and save it as a .PNG, then use that. (well personally, I'd just convert it to a vector shape and work with that, but thats me).
ileana
October 21st, 2005, 09:39 PM
Great job, thats a pretty good site - let alone a first flash site.

The only thing not mentioned that I would personally change is that little logo in the bottom right of the content box. Its a good logo, but I would fix the choppiness. I'd take that into Photoshop, smoothen the edges with an eraser and save it as a .PNG, then use that. (well personally, I'd just convert it to a vector shape and work with that, but thats me).

Thanks, Dae. But i donīt know what logo youīre tallking about? you mean the link to "proyecto pacha" e-mail? which browser are you using?
ileana
October 22nd, 2005, 08:43 PM
dude, you put us all to shame!
if that's your first, i'd hate to see how good you are in even 6 months time!
holy crap! you're good!


Stop flattering me jejeje :ne:. I said i had been doing things with flash before, this is my first site. Besides iīm a graphic designer (well, i have two more classes left but....).
I think the important thing is to know for sure what you want to do. Then sit at the computer and make it come true.
particledream
October 22nd, 2005, 09:36 PM
It's good, but it uses up A LOT of CPU... you should look for run-ons.
ileana
October 22nd, 2005, 10:01 PM
It's good, but it uses up A LOT of CPU... you should look for run-ons.


ok, that could be related to the high rate transfer im having doesnīt it? Could you tell me more about that run-ons thing? i donīt know what youre talking about :sigh:
waterworka
October 24th, 2005, 09:10 AM
this is your first site! :cyborg: GOD blessed you!

How much U.S dollars did you charge this cliente being they were your first!


This is my first(not finished)
give me some tips (Im self taught, photoshop and just learning flash, searching for a good book)

http://www.geocities.com/waterworka/armyofthelordsite.html?1129305535985
johnzie
October 24th, 2005, 11:39 AM
hey that's pretty good!

-johnzie-
SPAD3S
October 25th, 2005, 07:52 PM
:) artist in the house?
ileana
October 26th, 2005, 12:44 PM
you flatter me soooo much. you all make me blush, Thanks a lot.

You would laugh so much if i told you how much i charged them. very little, but, it was a good oportunity to make something nice with international perspective, for the exort all their products, and right now the are in neatherlands presenting the brand and site. Anyway, Iīll make them give me some of those awsome handbags in return.... thatīs a good idea...

Iīll kill my next clientīs wallet, you gave me confidence with all your complements jejejej.

I owe all i know to my former boss MaX Bidart, i learned everything from him. Heīs what we here in argentina call CAPO, MAESTRO, MASTER, MOSSSTRO. jejej