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dr_vroeg
10-20-2005, 05:04 PM
I was bored...crits?

mlk
10-20-2005, 05:11 PM
I really like the top part, but the colors of the bottom part I'm not too fond of.

dr_vroeg
10-20-2005, 05:26 PM
fair enough...thanks:)

Ψ
10-20-2005, 05:40 PM
i like the top part too but also not fond of the bottom part and the font. maybe try keeping the same style as the top through out the picture and use a different font

Limitlis
10-20-2005, 06:01 PM
I think it could be because it ends so sharply. If you were to remove the line and blend the transition it might be better. Or instead of just straight across like that make it wavy cuz everything else is fluid.

The "wierd" font kinda ruins it for me. :S sorry.

Sweet image though.

iLikePie
10-20-2005, 07:38 PM
like everyone else said... top part is nice, then when i scrolled down it was too disjointed. Try what limitlis said :)

fasterthanlight™
10-20-2005, 08:07 PM
It'd be gangster if the entire background was the background of the bottom one and the actual design was the electric blue from the top part