mocaFusion.com

[A1A2]

Hello, everyone,

This is my first time putting something up for critique here. This is something I have recently completed, quite a nightmare due to my schedule, lots coffee and all-nighters, but I thought it turned out o.k. please let me know what you all think:)

http://www.mocafusion.com




Albert
www.AlbertLan.com (http://www.AlbertLan.com)

[stat|c]

wow! very sleek! i love the mono colors and the music that goes with it. a job well done.

[musicwithcolors]

that's tight man :thumb:

i was working on a similar concept but alas..

[trundrumbalind]

Not too sure about the title fonts...

[treatkor]

graphics are sweet, the font reads morafusion.rom to me but i think it's distinctive like that. the drawings and paintings are kickass. transition sounds, motions & draw-ins are smooth and rich. albertlan.com rocks too
:thumb:

[danulf]

nicely done! That's all I want to say...

[Tomaz]

i love it!

[four1seven]

looks great except on the contact form the L on email is cut off and the T on subject is cutoff ;)

[BoonDock]

Damn that's great stuff! The only thing I would suggest is to make sure that you can read all the text. Might want to use some pixel fonts in there, because a lot of the description text etc. was very hard to read, and the first 3 words you see when entering the site are hard to read as well. Overall though, it's great! Kudos on a job well done. Impressive portfolio as well. Oh and welcome to the forums! I suggest you submit this to the next SOTW.

[simplistik]

That's a nice site ya got there :D I like it a lot, the theme is tight and the music accompanies it well. I'd have to admit though... seeing the "g94" text effect on a serif font is kinda new/strange to me, but it seems to work. Nice work in the portfolio as well.

[Sliker_Hawk]

Nice site!
Nice portfolio too.

The only problem I can find is that the transitions jump quite alot (on my poor-man celeron 1.75GHz, for the third time). They're stll good though.

[SAVAGER]

Great site... Love the vectors... The only thing that I would comment on is the text effect - it gets to be a little much when the text descriptions of your portfolio are jumping around and take a while to actually spell it out...

Other then that, great job man - very nice...

[MaToMaStEr]

ONE OF THE BEST SITES I'VE EVER ESEEN

[G]

one of the best portfolios I've seen for quite some time, and you're portfolio works are great.

Now I know who to thank for those great 3d models that I'm blowing up in MOH :)

great site :)

[haam]

this thing is gorgeous! so dark and lovely!

your masking is nice and smooth.

the music is a little choppy tho, my ony gripe

otherwise it's a friggen 10!

[RabBell]

yeah I like the site and yeah it is very slick

think you got a site here that could win ya a few awards......:thumb:

[Zach-E2]

mmm.. kickarseness!

[A1A2]

Thanks a bunch, guys...

Yeah, the text effect does go on forever with longer text, but due to the time limit, I was unable to work it out. But, I thought the text effect with serif fonts was an interesting combination as someone has already pointed out.

About the choppy loops, sign, I really wish onSoundComplete was more reliable, but messing with randomized audio loops is fun:)

again, thanks for the comments!

Albert

[cmart]

great site! well done. however would suggest putting a flash detection behavior because I didn't have flash 8 when I checked it earlier and it looked like crap- all the images and graphics went totally haywire....

[A1A2]

great site! well done. however would suggest putting a flash detection behavior because I didn't have flash 8 when I checked it earlier and it looked like crap- all the images and graphics went totally haywire....

really? The swf was published for player7 and scalable set to false...didn't test it with player 6 and below tho...which version did you have?

Thanks for the heads-up

Al

[Ordinathorreur]

Very nice indeed, great use of animation!

You might want to add a little something to your preloader script though. When it first appears it shows 100%, then goes down to 1% and starts showing the load progress. Add a little something like:

if(percentage<=100 && total !=0){
yourBar.width = percentage;
}

[Pasquale]

Wow nice animation. Just make ur body text dynamic to make it legible :P

[kazaa13]

wow
tis is a cool site.
was wondering how u do the sliding effects.. any tutorials here on how to do something like tat. thanks.

[SimplyArun]

damn good. but you've got to disable the right-click menu else things can get messed up. should consider optimising it for 800x600 tho - it looks messed up ( esp/ on firefox)

http://kirupa.com/forum/images/smilies/thumb2.gif

[rille31]

This site is really nice =) BUT I got one objection,

The site http://www.eh04.com/ in your portfolio is a template right?
If you put a template in your folio people might think that all your sites are templates ewen if they arent.

[rille31]

Hmm, this is also based on a template
www.balere.org/version2/corp/index.html
Im not judging you in any way but you dont say anywhere in your folio that those are based on templates

[A1A2]

thanks for all the comments and suggestions, everyone:)
as for the templates, this is a site for a client, so I really don't know if some of their works are templates or not....

As for the sliding trees, it's really simple, AS tween a few layers of trees, there you have it:)

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

[SawyeR]

http://www.mocafusion.com/archive/v08/mf8.html
This is exactly a TemplateMonster.com stuff, not yours ...
Your site is great, but I think a clear description is better.
Many work in your portfolio is not original, I dont mean "most of", but there're many template-based stuffs !!!

[mprzybylski]

i was going to comment on this (not as nice as everyone else) but seeing as some of the work is ripped, i don't think i'm going to spend my time on it. the only thing i'll say is you have a lot of errors all over the site, which MAY be due to the fact that you're ripping other people's stuff and you don't know how to fix it.

[A1A2]

It appears that you guys have missed my previous post....however, I don't feel the need to defend myself anymore tho.

Happy Holiday

-a

[SawyeR]

thanks for all the comments and suggestions, everyone:)
as for the templates, this is a site for a client, so I really don't know if some of their works are templates or not....

Do you know the difference between "don't know" and "don't care" ?

You said that "this is a site for a client" and "I really don't know if some of their works are templates or not" ? :P:P