gimme feedback pleeeeze

[jkm]

hello... I am experimenting with combining flash, photoshop, fireworks, and freehand...
tell me what you think....

http://www.jmkm.net/nav.htm

[DeV]

There really isnt much to critique at this point, the background image is pretty cool, and im not too sure about the black background. thats reall about it at this point :)

[T-O]

make a pre loader for god sake

[Aislin]

that's what I was going to say. preloader.

I'm on cable and it took a bit too load, so a 56k user would probably just give up on your site.

[eyeinfinitude]

Originally posted by jkm
hello... I am experimenting with combining flash, photoshop, fireworks, and freehand...

Looks like you combined way too much here so now it looks really busy. These are the bad things about the site.

1) There isn't a defined color scheme or even a theme, I have no idea what the site is about.

2) You have no defined layout actually, looks like just some random image put together with some sounds and text thrown in. I think you should preplan your site on paper before you actually go about designing.

It's good to experiment, but I think you over did it with this one. Good luck with your next experiment. =)

[jkm]

Thank all of you for the feedback..
The page is in a very early stage, abd I am just
know starting to study on this stuff. The page will be
meant to sell a particular service. I have all intentions on building
a preloader. Of course, I will also add actual content. I basically threw this page up here to get some opinions on the new graphics I have designed. This probably will end up being
done completely over. I change the website way too often. I am looking to build an index page that will not have to change for a while. Thanks again!
oh yea, I have another, It is a flash site I built for a kennel.
http://www.amkennels.net

[jkm]

WOA, I should have proof read the first reply...
I'm not an idiot... It's just 4:30 a.m. here in AL.
and I can't find my glasses...
Thanks again everybody!!! :crazy: