quick image

[reverendflash]

just a quick image for Mckesson finances...

whatcha think...

http://aulman.com/timlab/v1.jpg

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[liam]

its nice, but the fonts at the bottom look a little hokey, IMO. Maybe substitute those for something else. :blush:

[redViper]

ya, i think they look hokey too. It looks like you threw it together quick. Try just solid text, no 3dish kind of stuff

[Guig0]

i think that the text is hard to read...


you could use a lil bit more of contrast and a lil less opacity, on the bg image.

[thediablo]

just put the text and Bevel it a lil

[reverendflash]

this was thrown together quickly...

and this has to be extremely corporate.

If I'm going to use flat text, then I should just use HTML...

think a global bank...

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[DDD]

I think the text should have a lil more uniformity to it. The alignments look weird. If you do do flat text I dont think you do HTML because of the alias factor.

[mdipi]

yeahi dont like the chrome

[Aislin]

i have to agree, those letters are too much.

[reverendflash]

click here for next round of comps (http://aulman.com/mckesson/comp2.htm)

After a discussion with the client, this is the next round of comps.

BTW - these are just ideas, not final images. Once chosen, the final image will be completed, and much more professional looking...

Revhttp://www.aulman.com/rev.gif

[DDD]

2a for me.....the chrome doesnt look right.

[reverendflash]

my fav as well...

the client likes the silver look... But just the same, I wanted to show what normal text would look like.

We shall see what they (the committee) have to say.

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[gimmesomemore!!]

Ver. 2A is the most professional looking. I would deff. go w/ that one. The chrome isn't working.

[reverendflash]

as I said, the client likes the silver...

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[gimmesomemore!!]

that's cool. I think 2a is more professional looking though. Glad the client likes one.

[Guig0]

2a for me too rev.

[Aislin]

[[[I'm trying to edit, because I feel guilty. Sorry Rev. This should give a better idea of what I meant.]]]

I like 2 and 4.

what's wrong with four is the uniformity though, it just seems off.
Is it your client that's making sure you use two different font sizes, cause it's, like I said, just not very appealing to have it go from one to the other and back.

2a is fine, but if you made the silver a bit less.... blaring? bright? shiny? I don't know, but if you made it a wee bit easier to read in number 2, it would go a long way. The silver would be a lot more accepted by the members, I think. Even if they still preferred the normal text.

try and make 4 uniform, because I think it's got a lot of potential!

[reverendflash]

Originally posted by Aislin
Is it your client that's making sure you use eleven different font sizes, cause it's, like I said, driving me bananas.

there are 2 font sizes used...

me thinks you exagerate a bit...

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[Aislin]

yeah, I do I guess.

I didn't mean to offend you rev, I really didn't.
My apologies if I was over-the-top.

But really, you have to make them the same, and line them up nice. For some reason it's a real... turn-off, the way it is.

[reverendflash]

it's not what you said, but how you said it...

you just told me I had to change something. You didn't say, I don't like these because... (very few people still in High School have the design experience to say those kind of things with that kind of command without getting slammed in return).

no harm, but watch how you word things or be prepared for ugly responses.

[Aislin]

tried to fix it up. wasn't thinking. I was being funny in my head, but when it came out it was mean. My apologies again.

[reverendflash]

like I said...

no harm.

thanks for the advice on the images. I'll let you know what they decide...

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[Alex]

Hey rev, i like them all, but 2a is my fav. :)

[reverendflash]

cool...

we will see what they say... I wonder if I can find the client at the local watering hole...

may hafta check in on him...

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[prstudio]

good but too shiny

[reverendflash]

Guess What!

they chose #3...

I'll let you know when I flush out the idea this weekend, and have a more final image to show...

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[reverendflash]

http://aulman.com/timlab/finalv1.jpg

this is the image going to the client for Monday Morning...

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[liam]

hmm... what the client likes, the client gets i guess! :P:P:P