[Templarian] Site Crit

[Templarian]

http://www.templarian.com/

//edit, something messed up withs something i'll fix it later for now i have to directly link to index.htm.

still in development.

[deletedUser459]

looks pretty good :thumb:

i would just change the white background though

[TheCanadian]

Looks pretty good :thumb:. When is the game coming out?

[deletedUser459]

Looks pretty good :thumb:.

copycat...

[TheCanadian]

:lol: I didn't even notice.
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[Templarian]

lol. uhh... why does everyone ask me that i have to much stuff going on, between work and school. i havent even touched the map editor/ game engine in like a good month.

thx for the replys so fast. keep 'em coming.

//edit and over look every time i say the word we i mean "I".

[Jeff Wheeler]

It's a bit too tight. There's almost no white-space in the header, which is desperately needed. Also, the textures are a tad cheesy.

Other than that, I really like it :thumb:

[Templarian]

okay, thx nokrev i went back and spaced everything. good idea it does look a lot better now. I wasn't able to change the height of the top section becuase of the way its set up (it would of taken to long).

i also went and changed the picture that shows up in the bottom left with a better one i made (3d's fun). i will think of a new background later on, right now i cant think of a good picture to make.

keep 'em coming.

[kO2n]

All i see is a blank white page? o.0

[harlcon]

blank page for me also :S

[Pasquale]

AHHHH blank white burns my eyes! :cantlook:

[Templarian]

sry about that guys something messed up with server i think.

keep crit.

[G]

i just get a white screen....waited for a few mins and still white screen...:(

[Jeff Wheeler]

You forgot the l on that url ;)

[Templarian]

yea, i fixed it earlier today. i was changing stuff on the .html yesterday and must of messed up.

continue crits please.