Business card idea

[Dimitar]

This is what I had in mind as a business card for myself but not too sure yet.


http://www.nopause.net/dimitar/nopausebusinesscard.jpg
http://www.nopause.net/dimitar/nopausebusinesscard2.jpg

[ERNANDE]

Looks good, I'd either align your contact info to the left or your logo to the right so everything lines up.

[Dimitar]

Good idea I will :)

Cheers

[Oli-G]

Nice one mate, I like it, clean, organic, memorable colour. I think I actually like the contact stuff on the right, reason being it may become a little too unbalanced with a large hole if it's all shifted to one side. But i've never done business cards so take that advice with a grain of salt ;)

[jnstevens87]

That looks incredibly hard to read. Have you ran a proof to check for readability? Remember, if you ever plan to give your card to old people (potential clients maeby), make sure it's easily readable. I do like the design. The red looks very slightly pink on my comp. Would prefer a more red red.

[Dimitar]

It might be not very readable in the first pic because its scaled down in photoshop. For the other pic its low on quility and again scaled down a lot. I will make the font a little bigger though, I don't want to oversize it to ruin the clean look but I will see what suits it.

Cheers for the comments.

[j_polo9]

No and pause look like one word. It is a bit busy for a logo but readability isn't that bad. Although i don't like some of the letterforms, the letters don't seem to overall match (look at how wide your p and g is but how skinny your s's and e's are)

I like the feel of the cards but it does seem a bit empty for no reason except where the logo is. Good start!

[G]

Thats really good, its not overcrowded and looks pretty funky.

I think that they look good the way they are too many people try overcrowding bus cards with too much crap.

[Dimitar]

Heh Ill try to fix some things.

And nopause is one word dude.

[MarcoRussolillo]

Looks Good. PRINT :thumb2:

[Thijs]

Man, you've got some awesome stuff on your site!
If i see that i think you can make your card better then this!

The card is already good.. but i just think you can do it even better.

[B3NKobe]

Nice, simple and easy, the colour is very bright and effective, and i like the simple 'e' & 'w' for the email & website, as for the design around the name with the lines and that, its not really working, it just looks very boring & dull, however great concepts :thumb:

[Matt UK]

I like it but I always recommend doing 2 sided business cards to clients now. The first thing people do when you give them a biz card (or any print collateral) is turn it over. Plus when they drop it on floor/ desk if it lands wrong side up...

Also, phone number?

[slinkyart]

Your email address is incorrect. It says nopause@noause.net. You're missing the "P" in pause.

[Zach-E2]

hey man..
your email and web might be a little too small..
phone numbers are always a good thing to have.

maybe give the card a little more creativity? it's pretty bland.
not a bad start.. good job.
cheers.
z