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Aneurin, Mark II
August 28th, 2005, 03:45 PM
Despite my initial misgivings about the logo, I decided to put a template online.
http://am-2.meinman.com/am08test/
You think?
deletedUser459
August 28th, 2005, 03:50 PM
wow. thats awesome. i love the nav
Theros
August 28th, 2005, 03:53 PM
Decent, Dont like white on white :) srry... Also, ur nav that white bar thingy stands out way tooo much, try to make the opacity a little more transparent? Text on menu is ok..
Otherwise its cool! Try to add some more details?
Aneurin, Mark II
August 28th, 2005, 04:00 PM
Okay, I made the background lines a little more transparent and softened the border.
http://am-2.meinman.com/am08test/
It might seem a bit plain at the moment, but I have yet to add any sort of content display. This will be in the large white panel - the last to appear on the swf - but I haven't yet decided how to handle this.
Thanks for the comments so far. :)
G
August 28th, 2005, 04:08 PM
I like the nav (graphics) and the spring effect on the links but the main content area looks a little bland at the moment this may well change when you put something in there though :)
I don't really like the color scheme - grey and white...maybe a little experimentation may bring the design more to life :)
good work, but I feel with a little more work it will look and be a lot better :)
Aneurin, Mark II
August 28th, 2005, 07:14 PM
Am I allowed to bump? :P
j_polo9
August 28th, 2005, 07:27 PM
It's a good start but it is missing too much to give a good critique. Right now it is a bit too busy with design elements not matching up. Like the metalic rounded header and all the lines and sqaures, it looks like your trying to mix a futuristic theme with a japenese window framed colourless layout. I think you need to cut back on the squares and lines and gradients and simplify it and add some colour and content.
RavenStorm
August 28th, 2005, 08:15 PM
Dang, dang, dang, why can't I be that good? >.>
It's great, man. Flash 8?
Bird-E
August 29th, 2005, 01:31 AM
Solid design, very nice. I like the roll over text effects, reminded me of the good old days using the mac os docking bar thing. I like how the nav is spacy, but it feels a bit empty. Are you going to put a name or something on it? Ravenstorm, the look and feel of this site can be achieved with any version of flash and photoshop, keep practicing!
TheCanadian
August 29th, 2005, 01:39 AM
You think?Only when necessary :).
Looks great so far.
Aneurin, Mark II
August 29th, 2005, 05:38 AM
I like how the nav is spacy, but it feels a bit empty.
Yes. Yes, it does.
I should put something more in there.
Sliker_Hawk
August 29th, 2005, 05:47 AM
It's a nice layout, but the 'colours' are a bit... Non-existant.
colorlovers.com is your friend.
Try to get soemthing more contrasting.. But not too contrasting.
And when you click a button in the nav, it just restarts the animation (not that I was expecting there to be anything there).
Aneurin, Mark II
August 29th, 2005, 07:00 AM
Okay, I've added a splash of colour now. Colourlovers.com is great, I've bookmarked it! :)
That link again: http://am-2.meinman.com/am08test/
Aneurin, Mark II
August 29th, 2005, 07:01 AM
p.s. I am not a fairy. :P
Aneurin, Mark II
August 29th, 2005, 07:42 AM
Colour scheme update: changed from pink to orange/blue.
BoonDock
August 29th, 2005, 09:01 AM
I dig the logo, and the feel of the site...the colors aren't too bad, but aren't all that great either. (try some other color schemes) The nav will work but considering the flash skills it seems like you have, you could probably do more. Great start.
Theros
August 29th, 2005, 10:01 AM
I like this color scheme much betterm but I dont know If i like the repeating animation, good work!
SimplyArun
August 29th, 2005, 12:11 PM
:cool:
cool... the nav is pretty nifty. the colors can be improved tho. maybe, well maybe you should put some detail into the design
n how about a preloader?
and when is the content coming ??
www.simplyarun.com (http://www.simplyarun.com)
Aneurin, Mark II
August 29th, 2005, 01:19 PM
n how about a preloader?
There is a preloader... there's just not much to preload. You probably went straight past it. :lol:
and when is the content coming ??
Soon enough! I'll repost the site once I've filled it out a bit more. :)
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