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_this
August 13th, 2005, 07:10 AM
www.pablodavi.com/v1/main_.html (http://www.pablodavi.com/v1/main_.html)
• my site not finaly yet. but i want critique for modifique before put online.
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CRITIQUE.

Tks in advance

SeanXE
August 13th, 2005, 07:21 AM
Hey,

First off - awesome site. I love the preloader and the transitions you have.

Critiques:

Bottom right, you can't make out the word profile very well.

Secondly, is the rollovers, for a 'not-so-experienced' computer / web user, it would take them awhile to go over the clouds. Maybe something on the homepage that gives them a subtle hint to roll over them?

I know there small details but that's all i've got for now!


Sean

Blackspirit
August 13th, 2005, 07:30 AM
Hmmmm.

I don't like the "mystery meat" navigation. When I load up a page, I want to know which cloud to click on to get to contact.

The background I don't like either. My eyes can't really focus, specially on the text in some of the boxes that are background transparent.

The top three coloured bars look out of place.

The text in the profile box looks a bit, misaligned. I think its just too much text crammed into a small box. Maybe cause its in capitals as well...

The clouds look cool though, I can see this site looking very sweet. Keep going :) :thumb:

G
August 13th, 2005, 08:11 AM
My biggest beef was that the clouds seemed to block the content on the left.

Also their was some test which was kind of chopped off at the bottom of the column on the left.

_this
August 13th, 2005, 08:26 AM
nice. i ll think about rollover button for newbie users....
the background i need change to outher color, w/ more shadow.
thks guys...