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booler
August 12th, 2005, 02:40 AM
http://www.prostockbike.com/amb/logonew.png

what do you guys think?

j_polo9
August 12th, 2005, 02:43 AM
err is it AB designs or FB or FLB or FL3 or F3? i don't particulary like the mix of rounded and sharp edges for the type and don't particularly like the font for designs. It's an interesting idea though.

booler
August 12th, 2005, 02:46 AM
Its AB and I have a probelm with designs font too but I'm too tired to look through my fonts tonight I need to get in bed thanks btw for the crit I'll see if I can possibly distingush the A & B better.... tomorrow though :D maybe loo at all sharp or all round corners.... thanks

jnstevens87
August 12th, 2005, 02:49 AM
The logo is not clear on the name of the company. Is it AB designs, or FL3, or what? And I'm not a fan of words that are two different colors, unless the color change has some significance. Instead I would try making "designs" white with a blue stroke. And now that I take a second look, the two fonts don't really compliment eachother, because AB or FL3 has rounded corners and designs doesn't. Man I'm picky. Don't get me wrong, the logo isn't bad, it's pretty good. I think it has some good potential.

jnstevens87
August 12th, 2005, 02:50 AM
Arrrgh! Someone beat me to the punch before I could hit the post button.

booler
August 12th, 2005, 02:52 AM
thanks guys so far I think I have some good ideas to go from for later on I'm off to bed than ks again guys keep them crits coming and suggestions are most appreciated

G
August 12th, 2005, 03:32 AM
I thought it was FL3 at first but I can make out the AB if I look hard :)

I like it but I think it would look better without the 'designs' and black bars on each side.

BoonDock
August 12th, 2005, 10:56 AM
AB is the first thing I saw booler...but don't just stick with one design till you are completely satisfied with the outcome, try sketchin out quite a few of them on paper scan those in and submit those for us to letcha know what we think...it's always hard to just critique one logo without seeing what else you have came up with...

booler
August 12th, 2005, 01:17 PM
This was just something I came up with last night, I don't have a scanner and I can convey my thoughts better with a digital surface rather than a pencil and paper... I do draw them out but its easier to show everyone what I'm thinking and I get a better grasp of the desing once it gets digital as my drawing skills suck pretty bad... need to take some rudimentry art classes... I like to get people feedback about the desings too to see where improvements can be made etc I think I might actually have a good starting point with this one though