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Sylint
March 26th, 2003, 11:35 PM
Hi all, this is my first piece of pixel art... please give any constructive comments/criticisms/tips that I could do to make this piece more interesting or better hehe. Hope you all like it! ;)

Here it is:
http://www.geocities.com/voodoo3blt/pixelart/pixelart.htm
morse
March 26th, 2003, 11:46 PM
WELCOME SYLINT
(c) electrongeek

thats pretty good for your first time! Better than me!
Sylint
March 26th, 2003, 11:48 PM
Wow hehe thanks for the big welcome! =). And thanks hehe I think it could use a little more detail though...
morse
March 26th, 2003, 11:58 PM
Well, right off the bat I noticed excellent shading and detail. Kinda tough to tell what is going on with those yellow dots though...
Lunar_4u
March 27th, 2003, 07:13 AM
Ye that is great for a first effort, very nice shading. But if you want some critisism, i don't think the feet look quite rite, kinda looks like it on tip toes, dunno mite just be me, and i agree with morse about the yellows bits
El Phantom
March 27th, 2003, 02:17 PM
Yes, very good. I'd change the perspective a bit for more drama, but it is pixel art after all. :)

--EP
mdipi
March 27th, 2003, 07:23 PM
over all very very good for yer first piece. i mean it could use a pit detail and it is a little small but thats it! i like it :A+: and welcome!
subquark
March 28th, 2003, 04:39 PM
i like it a lot, post more when you get 'em!
<--JAX-->
March 29th, 2003, 10:09 AM
Its good but its not REALLY pixel art,
most pixel art is isometric
e.g.
<--JAX-->
March 29th, 2003, 10:10 AM
but yeah
otherwise its really good