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Hauff
July 27th, 2005, 02:43 PM
Hi guys, this is my first post and I would like to know what you think about this study of layout.
Thanks for any comment and forgive my bad English.

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4230/pratica0170av.jpg
imark
July 27th, 2005, 02:50 PM
I like it alot, but it doesn't give me a "portfolio" vibe. It looks like a a webpage for the yellow pages.
Tommy_S
July 27th, 2005, 03:05 PM
Not bad. Too yellowish, but it's OK.
Tocksiq
July 27th, 2005, 03:43 PM
I think its great
thats all folks
July 27th, 2005, 03:49 PM
Really cool, nice curves......


cheers
Hauff
July 27th, 2005, 04:07 PM
Thanks folks!
Any other comment of sugestion?
Jeff Wheeler
July 27th, 2005, 04:08 PM
I like it a lot, but I'm not too fond of the thick gray lines to the left of some of the text.

Great job :thumb:
pyrophone
July 27th, 2005, 04:21 PM
I like it - but as stated above, don't care for the thick gray lines to left of text.

Edit -- "Number 1 Design Firm, Worldwide renowned" seems a little over the top, too
Hauff
July 27th, 2005, 04:24 PM
maybe a grey little lighter?
nicholas87
July 27th, 2005, 05:03 PM
It would be great for yellow cab! Give them a call!
Zach-E2
July 27th, 2005, 05:23 PM
it's definitely different, but i like it! nice job, man.. nice flow
natalia84
July 28th, 2005, 06:42 AM
Hi! I think it's really cool, but to make it better I would change a little bit the shape of the middle white buttons (right and left sides). :)
e-sarbak
July 28th, 2005, 08:05 AM
That is very good maybe you can do something about the top navigation it looks very "bad"
Dwight
July 28th, 2005, 08:32 AM
Yellow :-/
slumgutt
July 28th, 2005, 08:58 AM
I don't like the background, but the rest is sweet (http://www.charts-4u.de/70er/Sweet%20-%20Greatest%20Hits446_f.jpg).
thats all folks
July 28th, 2005, 09:27 AM
I would push the nav buttons further....They don't fit the theme, it kinda looks like you slaped them into a great overall design.....
Ed?
July 28th, 2005, 10:31 AM
My fave bit is the: 'number one design firm' bit really nice :D
Hauff
July 28th, 2005, 10:47 AM
Thanx for the comments, actually the menu was too simple, give a look.



http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/5584/pratica01710eh.jpg
Jeff Wheeler
July 28th, 2005, 12:09 PM
Much better.
thats all folks
July 28th, 2005, 12:15 PM
I think your going in the right direction with the nav, but can you make the buttons look like the "yellow design" the circles to left of the type bother me, but that could be me...Like I said before you have these nice curves and color and layout but that nav just looks out of place.....

cheers
thats all folks
Hauff
July 28th, 2005, 12:44 PM
I got you, maybe you're right...thanks!