first site

[farsite]

this is my first completed site

its a freebie for a friend

be gentle with me!

I know the design is kinda poor but i hope i'll get better.

http://www.enzoclothing.co.uk

[Tommy_S]

Can't understand you: you want me to tell you that the site is awesome, even if it's your first attempt (saying to be gentle) or to hear that I can't call it a site? To be honest, your first attempt is a rough mess of different style and fonts, which distract the viewer's attention from the very point of the site. That's it.

[mchanson]

Not as good as my first try, ha ha ha! Just read up on design a little bit and practice.

[dec27]

I think the best you can do to get inspired is to look at sites, of course good sites.
Try FWA (http://www.favouritewebsiteawards.com/) there you'll find the best of the best.

Honestly there is too much to improve: the buttons are... awful, need to relate the elements of the page, to align the header with the text, use a readable text, don't use too many colors... just take a look at FWA and concentrate.

Keep working! :bandit:

[mpnaz]

I don't think it's that bad at all for a first site, the layout has much to be desired, and the fonts...well, it has already been said. But the knowledge of flash is there, keep working at it! every site i do gets better and better, stick at it!!!

[farsite]

thanks guys,

design is definately my achilles heel!
the scripts all work and my flash abilities are improving and to be honest this is where I prefer to spend my time.
yes, the buttons are awful but I am working on a new nav for it and also the fonts are all gonna be sorted.

I think good design skills are quite hard to learn, it seems some people just have a natural ability with design, unfortunately I dont have any, but who knows maybe when I spend a bit more time tidying up the visuals it may look ok.

[zoe_says]

Maybe try and pick a theme, and go with it. With the way your site is now, it looks like notebook paper, but with typewriter font, and then you have a sort of architectural feel to it as well. I wouldnt have a clue you were selling clothes just by looking at your site. I would suggest maybe making a clothes rack that moves and on the clothing i.e jacket have a link to "brands". OR make your page a clothes closet that opens up to your information. Just some ideas. GOod luck to you, I think you're going to do great!