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bobbo0722
July 20th, 2005, 10:23 PM
This is a site I made for a friend of mine. It is an online portfolio of her modeling career. I made it a while ago but just remade it because I didn't know what I was doing with flash before. :cantlook: Let me know what you think.
www.kexcell.com (http://www.kexcell.com)
Jeff Wheeler
July 20th, 2005, 10:26 PM
She's too beautiful for the site.
Templarian
July 20th, 2005, 10:30 PM
i would defualt it to home.
and work on the text layout in contact.
You might want to use another logo for your credits page.
bobbo0722
July 20th, 2005, 10:37 PM
What's wrong with the logo?
Jeff Wheeler
July 20th, 2005, 10:54 PM
Comic Sans is generally frowned upon due to it's obvious ugliness (and overuse).
and The green half doesn't really work here.
bobbo0722
July 20th, 2005, 10:58 PM
Hmmm...its not cosmic sans, but i appreciate your input. :thumb2: I wasn't sure what to do with my logo, so i just threw one up there.
Jeff Wheeler
July 20th, 2005, 11:05 PM
close enough
Limitlis
July 21st, 2005, 02:58 PM
WHY DOES EVERYTHING HAVE TO LOAD SEPERATLY?

When going through the gallery, everytime it loads a different image it dissappears and shows the loading bar. Is this just a MC you go to or is it actually loading the images?

I've downloaded movie clips faster than those low-res jpegs. Usually you some people load sections seperatly... like the about, contact, or the (entire) gallery page. It goes too slow.

You should have something come up on the first page the visitor sees. Use her best photo, and maybe have some news or updates or availability (for photo shoots).

Did you look at any other professional model's sites?

Also on the top where it says Excell maybe try flipping that upside down. Like if it were reflecting her first name but have it be her last. Excell is such a simple last name that it wouldn't be hard to read. Plus most of the letters are symetrical so they would read the same upside down xcept the lowercase "e".

Just my opinions.
bobbo0722
July 21st, 2005, 04:01 PM
To be honest with you I am not sure when a preloader is needed. I am still new to flash so I don't know all of the in's and out's yet. I used one for every pic in the gallery. The site still needs some tweeking, I know, but I appreciate your input.
Limitlis
July 21st, 2005, 04:12 PM
hey no problem. Its a great start though. Its great that your trying to learn.

:thumb:
imark
July 21st, 2005, 06:37 PM
It's a good start, I would try and work on the color scheme. The grey doesn't really appeal to me.
bobbo0722
July 22nd, 2005, 11:20 PM
Hey, i remade the photo gallery for this site, but i'm not sure it fits the scheme. What do you think?
www.kexcell.com