First crack...let me know how I can improve.

[jbaughman]

My first full site in flash. (http://www.mymemorymontage.com)

Can I get a little feedback from you all on this site. I'm definately new at this, but not many people care about that so let me know what needs to be better.

Thanks in advance.

Jamie

[revelations1318]

looks really nice to me. maybe make the buttons into smooth animations using complex rollovers, just a suggestion.

[SlowRoasted]

hey not bad for your first try. keep at it. I would work on your interface design and definitely speed up the fps so that the animation is smoother

[colombianking]

like others said speed up the fps

and complex buttons would be nice
but overall i like and its your first so good job:hugegrin:

[jbaughman]

like others said speed up the fps

and complex buttons would be nice
but overall i like and its your first so good job:hugegrin:


Thanks for the kind words everyone. I owe a lot to this site. I've never taken any class...just come here and do the tuts and read the forums. You guys are the BOMB.

[revelations1318]

*in a parrots voice* "thats the way to do it!"......hope thats a universal joke and not just one my grandpa cracks....seriously...it looks good....far better than my first attempt (which is below in my sig)....ur site flows luverly!

[zoe_says]

I think you are doing well. Thats what I do/did too. Just this forum, a "flash for dummies" book, and tutorials lol. My advice would be a better heading and the pictures that are faded at the bottom , maybe after the page load it goes from faded to clear with some framing around them. Just some thoughts. :)

Keep up the good work love.

[goto()]

You can improve it with some beauty things...
I mean, a preloader, and a great and active animation like intro...!!
:)