Logo for game

[Blackspirit]

Boo,

I've being working on a flash game in my spare time, and need some thoughts on the logo.....

http://users.tpg.com.au/bspirit/logosmall.jpg

[zoe_says]

I'm no expert but I would take out the solid top part out. And I am sure everyone will ask you to tell them what kind of game it is first lol.

Logos were a nightmare for me. So good luck to you love.

[Blackspirit]

The top part is supposed to be a helmet, I'm think of putting a visor on it. Make it a bit more recognizable. :)

[Lewwy]

Yea, the solid oval at the top is a bit over-powering..

Im guessing its some sort of RPG? Or action?

If you cut a hole in the oval, then fill it with a huge letter.. In a really cool style.

[Blackspirit]

updated, i put a visor on him, to lighten it up.

Although that letter idea is pretty sweet. I'll have to draw up a couple of setups.

Its kinda RPG/Action game.

Its basically a jousting game with some RPG elements such as character development and inventory managment. You basically trot around the country attending tourneys, trying to earn lots o gold :)

[Lewwy]

Sounds good :)

The helmet is better with the visor, but maybe you could define it a little bit, try to make the shapes sharper, so that it looks likea helmet :P .

When do we get to see the game? Looking for beta testers? ;)

[cameron_]

i took my finger and covered up the hald circle, and i like it more. It makes the sword stonger. I would removed shapes that dont reference anything

[BoonDock]

A knight and a sword, but the knight looks a lot like an astonaught or something to that effect. Try some other designs, but keep the sword and the lower half...

[bwh2]

A knight and a sword, but the knight looks a lot like an astonaught or something to that effect.
i also sort of thought this. but not an astronaut; instead i saw one of those little fishtank diver guys. the sword handle looked like a chess piece to me. so i thought it was a chess game.

[Disco-Stu]

Perhaps a shield with that logo in the center might fill it up a bit. ATM, it looks slightly too long.

[DDD]

its a nice start. I would remove some of the curves and add some sharp edges. It looks feminine as it stands. But I do see what it is supposed to be. Adding some edges will make it a lil more medieval looking.

[cameron_]

that isnt a chess pawn?

[Blackspirit]

lol, my brother thought it was a chess pawn as well. I did some helmets, and I did a more angular design. I don't know if I like it, I'm thinking of replacing the three outer parts with a more thorns type feel. Hopefully its less feminine :D :)

http://users.tpg.com.au/bspirit/logofourheads.jpg

http://users.tpg.com.au/bspirit/logosword.jpg

[Vexir]

Very nice, these; I'd say the 4th one and the 5th one really take it :)

[bwh2]

i think in part the femininte look is a result of the weak shoulders

[Blackspirit]

Maybe if I combine 4 and 5? Made the shoulders a bit squarer

http://users.tpg.com.au/bspirit/logosword2.jpg

[kingofnukes]

that looks a lot cooler, keep experimenting with the helmets a sword designs until you find one you like.

[Vexir]

sweet blackspirit, looks a little too long though.. but its good...


and kingofnukes buddy, there is a footer guidlines.. ur image has to be 300 by 60 px sorry to break it to you.. haha..

a mod is going to remove that VERY soon, so i'd get rid of it fast if i were you

[buckcee]

it looks really nice, good job!