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Bohner
July 3rd, 2005, 08:51 AM
For some time now, I've been trying to make a decent site for 'our' webdesign services, but most projects landed in the bin. This is nr #8, it's not yet finished, there is no menu, cause I didn't decide yet, and the placing of the windows and such can, and might change.

So here it is:
*updated*
http://bohner.asdf.pl/projects/druid/druid.png

Suggestions and criticizm welcome.

Digitalosophy
July 3rd, 2005, 04:47 PM
mmm ok start but not enough there to give a full critique. I like the structure of it, may want to darken those grey's just a little.

info@rkirby.com
July 3rd, 2005, 05:02 PM
Why darken the grey's? I think the lighter grey aids in giving the site a light airy field. Dark greys would make it foreboding.

squan
July 3rd, 2005, 06:50 PM
those curved edges of the contentbox are too blurry and stretched, make 'm tighter.

ElectricGrandpa
July 3rd, 2005, 07:43 PM
Ok well your "Druid" text needs fixing, it looks very odd. The bevel/glowing around the edges makes it look quite bad. Also, all of the green leaves need some definition. At the current moment they look too blurry and fireworksy(although I like the colour).

You need to figure out the weighting of the black area at the bottom. There is no way your copyright text should be larger than the menu items... Your copyright should not be the first thing my eyes focus on when I look in the black area. Either make your menu text larger, or make the copyright text the same size as the menu text and make it grey instead of white... or do both.

Also, you don't need the "Best viewed under 1024x768 blah blah blah" text. It's absolutely pointless because the users will already be looking at your site by the time they see it.

Other than that, I think it's a cool-looking site with great potential, I can tell it will be a sweet site when it is finished.

-Matt

Bohner
July 3rd, 2005, 08:10 PM
Now that's a comment/review : ) I'll certainly give your suggestions a thought.